Valentine Patenaud AKA Heatstroke: 28%
Ian Rattray: 10%
personality
I play as a mother who tries her best to get back on her feet and support her child, feels like a fish out of the water in this new city and is weirded out by superheroes and is wary towards them and the people of this city in general, is polite and loves everything spicy. All she wants is a quiet life lol
Mostly going for my standard chaotic neutral male, avoiding picking side as long as possible , Is in general kind person and willing to help untill pushed too farâŚ
And here are the stats
i just choose what choice i likeâŚiâm going for a careful but curious person, and unflappable because, well, when youâre at the very bottom of your life you donât get anxious about things like my situation right now the stats are clear, in my opinion.
alsoâŚi choose to go to the hotel first, and i very much like a candy butâŚcanât say no when your kid ask for it can we give it to them but ask for another candy from the hotel?
TERMS APORIA: Agency for Power Organization, Regulation and Independent Assessment. Commonly called âThe Agencyâ.
The institution organizing powered individuals in Cornucopia City. Provides power tests, medical aid and assistance and training, as well as cases for Powered Individuals, registered or unregistered. RPI: Registered Powered Individual.
A person possessing superpowers and/or enhanced (supernatural) abilities registered with the APORIA. PI-U: Powered Individual (Unregistered).
A person possessing superpowers and/or enhanced (supernatural) abilities NOT registered with the APORIA. Includes PIs from other cities. CL: Case Level
Rating for cases reported to the APORIA. CLL: Clearance Level
Rating of a RPI, based on their competence, experience and power-level.
About Case Levels
Gamma
Lowest Case Level. Includes patrols in green- (or if accompanied by either a team of the same or higher CLL OR a RPI of a CLL above 3, yellow-) rated areas, retrieval of lost harmless objects,
Delta
Second lowest Case Level. Includes patrols in green-, yellow- (or if accompanied by either a team of the same or higher CLL OR a RPI of a CLL above 6, red-) rated areas, retrieval of lost dubious (or lower rated) objects,
Beta
Second Highest Case Level. Includes patrols in green-, yellow-, red- (or if accompanied by either a team of the same or higher CLL OR a RPI of a CLL of 9 or 10, purple-) rated areas, retrieval of lost dangerous (or lower rated) objects,
Alpha
Highest Case Level. Includes patrols in all areas, retrieval of lost devilish objects,
Omega
Special Case Level. Cases with this CL are ONLY available to TEAMS of Powered Individual with a Clearance Levels of 9 and 10.
About Clearance Levels 1-3:
Allows a RPI to take up cases of a Gamma rating. 4-6:
Allows a RPI to take up cases of a Gamma and Delta rating. 7-8:
Allows a RPI to take up cases of all but Alpha and Omega ratings. 9-10:
Allows a RPI to take up all cases.
Is this clearly understandable? Also, what other cases/things would you have as examples?
First off, I think itâs an interesting (and ambitious!) idea to deal with the two characters and the genre-mixing setting. Curious to see where it goes
Also, I kind of have to ask what you think âtwatâ means? Just because you mentioned a way up the thread about not using gendered slurs, however in the context where itâs being used about women and in the context of someone cheating it comes across ⌠kind of awkward. Like youâre using it as a c-word fill-in, basically.
Dumb mobile uploads - itâs the scene with that woman yelling at the receptionist about âscrewing around with that twat of a waitressâ. In that specific context I think the line comes across dirtier than you may have been intending ⌠but I may be over-analysing
No, thatâs intentional.
Ponytail is a self-righteous asshole, not taking kindly to the receptionist breaking up with her (and starting a new relationship ONE YEAR after the breakup)
I use âtwatâ elsewhere too, though. (been told it is okay to use compared to the c- or b-word, but Iâll look into it. possibly change Ponytailâs outburst to worse)
Ahh.
So, you think itâll be alright if I keep using twat (only when the MC is really pissed at a woman (potential former spouse, vile relatives, Haggerty, etc) and maybe change Ponytailâs outbreak to worse?
Note:
In the coming update (trying to get it out on the 10th or 15th), Haggertyâs first name will be changed from Helen/Jonathan to Fay/Frank, for very specific reasons.