I never played Elder Scrolls, I just imagined Dandelion looking similar to the character Hung from Arknights (even though he’s more of a dog lol) just with a different color palette😆
Since I like most of the designs of the ‘furry/scaly’ characters there it makes it easier for me to picture the Kindred, if that makes sense.
I really liked what we’ve got to read so far and am looking forward to more! :3
Is f dandelion supposed to have a full “maine” like male lions? Or is that an error? Of the ladder then i think she loose the maine beard but keep the wild hair on top. Basically male keeps the maine and f has wild hair like normal human. Just a thought
The way you write is sooo good. I HAD to check out your other WIP which was equally praise worthy.
Will you add the option to play as a normal ork
So, this is interesting. All the ROs are intense and the story has brought up some very hard topics here. At least for the human route? 
Step pop’s really ain’t nothing but doggy poop for his actions, frfr.
Oh, boi! I love this WIP! Is so promising! <3
I can’t wait to read the other prologues 
This wip is an instant fav of mine, right from the first chapter <3 can’t wait for more
Hello, so when I picked Shadowbright I get a few extra lines from the voice compared to other schools of power. Is it because it’s canon or bc of MC’s stats?
“Are you not going to use my gift, little rabbit…?”
“Tsk tsk, so soft… Too soft to use my gift, you wound me, child of mine.”
Iirc shadowbright has a sort of sentience and can talk to mc
Btw i believe the phrase in the title screen (the subheading) should be “all that GLITTERS is not gold”. “Glister” is a word but its an archaic word, no one nowadays really says “glister”. You are either thinking of “glitters” or “glistens” I could be wrong. Someone back me up if I’m right, please.
Your choice in the end but i think many people will be confused in your word choice.
Ah, I thought the same way! I thought the phrase had “glitters” instead. I just assume it was my bilingual brain mixing phrases again. LOL!
Side note! This was such an amazing demo to go through. Ahhh, love it. Might gotta go through another round before I’m back to writing. ;w;
Maybe the author just wanted to use the quote from Shakespeare? In that case, “All that glitters is not gold” would be correct.
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