Wow, now you’re really pandering the fan-service aren’t you?
All kidding aside you have created one dystopic world here (or an accurate reflecting of what superhero’s would be like in our real one if they actually existed) my friend, where selling crap and looking good (though that last one I’ll admit as a vice of many of my mc’s) is more important than the actual hero stuff.
Are you going to tell this story in a serious tone or is gonna be more quintessentially British and lighthearted like Red Dwarf, or something?
At this point, it’s quite possible that I chose the name subconsciously (and it would be both ).
EDIT:
You are in the land of rainbows and unicorns, where all is happiness, and the Power of Friendship reigns supreme—
You haven’t read my main WIP, have you? I’m wondering what your opinion would be…
No not really. I don’t give feedback to authors I don’t know to avoid problems because there is lot of people don’t like my sincere opinion. And I am terribly with names so Except is Called Parrotwatcher or the brownish butterfly sitting boringly in a herb… I have no idea of your wip is this one?
I find your sincere opinions (and your nicknames) quite funny very illuminating, as you generally look at things from a… different point of view.
Well, it’s an orange butterfly, and it’s much harder to photograph them when they’re not sitting boringly.
Well, this one’s very very short, but my main WIP is Totem Force. I already have a few more… ruthless players, but if you want to check it out, I wouldn’t mind your sincere opinions.
Just a question: Do people want transgender choices? On the positive side, it’s inclusive, and accepts that not everyone is cisgender; on the negative side, I probably wouldn’t reference it very much at all (so it might seem like a pointless addition). (Note that a non-binary option will definitely be provided, although that will likely only affect pronoun use.)
I read it and I found it … boring and nothing really. It was like reading a police report about rescue a cat from a tree. I had to summon all my will to still reading. No choices, no interaction with anything. Just a boring gal TELLING NOT SHOWING her life in a weird person wiew like first and half. A never ending wall of text. It needs more interactive maybe show in real time solitaire affairs and give fake choices to give something to resemble a Cog. The good part is when game starts like MC is cool. sorry to be a pain in the ass.
As I said, this WIP is still in very early stages, and I’ll probably cut down Solitaire’s section a bit. It was actually my other WIP, Totem Force, that I was wondering if you’d tried.
Honest, constructive criticism (i.e. not just “you’re gaem sukkz!!1”) is never a “pain in the ass”.
I mixed it with another similar game lol in other year. I am short-term memory about what judge lol. I read so much them in a month looking minor stuff that I ended forgotting all soon lol. like it was info for a exam.
Pow radioactive kitty it was okbut for me is un playable because I HATE THAT STUPID FORCED FRIENDS THEY ARE THE WORST AND I WANTED KILLING THEM like there is a forced goodie game is not for me… Kunfu Kaila And Beat up guy. @ParrotWatcher Sorry tobe so critical your writing is good. it is just you don’t give enough freedom to me rp your games
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reigns supreme—
oh well. It’s probably for the best. Especially considering that the MCs would have to fight due to strict crossover rules
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