I hope you all like tons of bad grammer and uncapitalized i’s because there’s a lot. I use advanced hunt and peck. Meaning I usually am descent speed but no capitals. Another question, the demo is done just need one more thing. How do you make a title, it always says my first choicescript and no idea how to change it!
does that mean you gonna release the demo today!
Well no, like I said webs.com has a seven day waiting period. So I have to wait till the 22nd. And I need to change the title still
Oooh: how about CoM (Choice of Murder)?
oh sorry didn’t see that part 
@iyashiiotaku, I need to know how
To change the title not a name though I will do someth
Ing Like that
Oh. Guess I wasn’t paying as much attention as I thought.
Can’t help you on HOW to put the title…
Sorry…
In the index.html, you change the title of the page, and also within the page, you can change the text to your game’s name.
About actually changing the title: What JimD said. Also, if you plan on making more than one game and posting them to the same site, you can also change the way the games call up the index file so that your games only need a new folder. (You can PM me if you want/need help with that, as I just did it for my own site).
@IyashiiOtaku and @Cdasselin remember that “Choice of (blank)” is reserved for games made by the creators of ChoiceScript.
@ jimD and reaperoa, thank you for the help and im thinking of " A choice to kill "
Haven’t read Dexter, just saw the shows, but will look forward to this and test it out. Will help point out any bugs/loops/language mistakes on the way if you like when it’s out 
Thanks zero647 lot of grammar stuff though lol. I’ll have my friend fix all that though. We are determined to enter intercomp 2012, get our names as an IF developer out there! Not this one though
how do i put it on my webs.com
ok heres the demo. i know its short but please give feed back.
http://deviouslydeliciousgames.webs.com/SK%20demo/mygame/index.html
Interesting but very short… Moves quite fast too, I’d suspect a serial killer would be more inclined to go slow and saver the moment
It’s a good idea, but the demo is indeed short.
Few things to help you out:
It’ll help make the game look better if you format your text into paragraphs, and use capital letters at the beginning of sentences. When you ask questions, end the sentences with question marks.
When you choose your signature weapon, it might be better to offer the player a choice, and provide them with your own options. For example:
What weapon do you use in your killings?
*choice
#A Knife.
#A Gun.
#Poison.
#My bare hands.
#Whatever I can find the moment.
#I like to use a different weapon for each kill.
Then set a variable based on their choice. Allowing the player to use whatever they can think of can make it difficult for you to write the game, unless their signature weapon is purely for building their character’s image.
Keep up the good effort!
Is he still work on this?
Oh, I didn’t even realise this thread had been necromanced.
This is from two years ago. I doubt it. If I could delete my post, I would. Perhaps this should be closed?
Reading through this thread brings to mind a question to mind: is there a way to make a game where you ARE the serial killer and make it fun to play? A post above me mentions the TV show Dexter, which is a good example since the main character is also a serial killer, but only kills people who evil and killers themselves. Obviously this would be morally laden with questions like “Should I really be doing this?” and such. Just thought it was worth exploring.
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