Choice of the Vampire - community input [SEE POST 1305]

Thanks. I wanted to make sure it was possible to avoid it. This is just to ensure using playtime wisely; if it was scripted for failure, sort of as a dry run for Cult 2.0 in a future installment would be fine.

If it will help, I can provide screenshots of this later today. Basically, this is a playthrough where the character build has Charm 4, consumes Dido’s heartsblood, then does the same to the vampire in question.

If I aided Dr. Cousins and Washington University in the development of the TB vaccine by becoming Cousins’ lab assistant, does it still count towards the “Support Development of a Vaccine” achievement? I am asking because the description says that I funded the development of the vaccine.

As the 666th post, here’s my testing feedback (just choices that I wished had another option or confusions I had). I played as a Southerner who focused on Clotho and was later buried in Vicksburg and died waking up. I don’t think all of this stuff needs to be changed, it’s just my running thoughts, and I have similar thoughts during every game I play (often from myself not paying attention).

  • If I had the choice, I would have made my maker a woman
  • “Unaccustomed to the modern world, this individual—more beast than man—found in you a medium between his world and yours.”–I thought this text implied that I was already a vampire when I met him, and that I was quite old but not as old as him.
  • In the stats, $US2012 is odd since it’s a fixed date that’s no longer current.
  • I was confused during the opening scene. Being in a croft made me think I was a vampire, but ‘who has recently taken you as a companion.’ made me think of myself as a human companion. That made the first choice confusing, too; I felt like I had no idea what the two options would do.
  • I was roleplaying a religious vampire. When consoling my dying grandmother, the two religious options both rely on pre-destination. I would have chosen an option saying that I believed in heaven and hoped she made it there.
  • Had some trouble deciphering the patois at first (I spent a lot of time with Clotho)
  • I was very confused throughout the story when feeding on people seemed to go unnoticed by them. When replaying to find the text for this post, I was surprised to find that in other paths your patron tells you about this. West did not tell me in my playthrough.
  • A few times the story told me my reaction when I would have preferred to choose my own. For instance, when the game said, “It is my honor, sir. I am Mr. Obediah Foster, progeny of West.”, and below that, “Well, I assure you, I both walk upright and tend to my physical affects with care.”, and later when I was leaving Guidry after deciding not to unleash the beast on him (I couldn’t find it again to write it down). Having some kind of option for a reaction would have been nice, even if I picked the same reaction already in the text.
  • I found this statement odd: “What dealings do you have with that witch I saw on my way in? Has she cast a spell upon you?” as I had no reason to believe that the man had a negative reaction to her. I would have expected that he wanted to purchase a spell from her, or called for her for some other reason.
  • When sneaking into Clotho’s meeting where she gets shot at, it said the room was draped in fabrics, then it mentions that someone else was ‘also behind the curtains’, but it never mentioned curtains. I had thought of the fabrics as throw rugs
  • After the line with ‘Babineaux kicks and curses’ there is the line of dialog where your character says “I…I don’t understand” but it’s unclear who says it at first, since the previous paragraph (in my playthrough) was talking about two other people. Could use a dialog tag.
  • The only option to get Clotho to leave you at one point is “I have met someone else”, but the way I had been playing Clotho was literally the only person I had chosen to interact with for quite some time. Maybe adding (Lie) afterwards or a third option would be nice
  • In the scene right after Van der Velde had Jesse kill Clotho and I mourned her, my game asked what I wanted to do and one option was 'Improve my relations with the Quaestor", which felt odd as he just ordered the death of the love of my life. When I clicked on the option, I did him a favor and when he asked what I wanted in return, all the options were for learning more vampire lore (which I had set as a goal at the beginning of the game), but no options to ingratiate myself with him, which I thought was the whole point of the encounter.
  • Another response in the text that I felt should have been a choice is when the governor asks me about Van der Velde and it says ‘"I am most grateful for Van der Velde,’ you reply honestly."
  • In my stats page, if I clicked on Qaestors, it says what they are but doesn’t list any, throughout the game.
  • When the governor comes, I meet three people, including her bodyguard. The only options are to remain silent (‘Obey the admonition’) or to attempt to ask the bodyguard a very specific question about Senators. I would have chosen an option to ask the bodyguard about himself.
  • When I had a chance to ‘offer a debt’ when the painter came, I wasn’t sure what that meant. Maybe using the word ‘favor’ somewhere could help.
    *The game at times seems to imply that there was some great success Jesse had or that he had a conflict with Van der Velde, but in my game Jesse only had a poetry contest with the lady and Van der Velde was confirmed Quaestor. I didn’t see any conflict between them or great successes by Jesse. This was the text that didn’t make sense to me: “Despite Jesse’s triumph, he still sees himself as being on poor footing among the citizenry of New Orleans. In light of his previous conflict with Van der Velde, he seems desperate to prove his loyalty and indispensability.”
  • When I met Silas, I had about 3 options in a row that were just ‘I’m madly in love’ or ‘I will leave this man forever’. I would have picked a neutral option like asking about the regiment

You didn’t ask for our favorite parts, but I really enjoyed freeing my servant’s brother, the options you had available when watching Clotho’s seance from hiding, and the big, wide options to improve any stat you want.

2 Likes

you have to get 5 “points” to push WU to discover the vaccine. You can get those points in a variety of ways. But if you can see the achievement, then you got it; it’s hidden from those who haven’t done it.

I think I figured this out.

When I started writing this game, 2012 was the future!

Yeah, I’m trying to be a little ambiguous there: you may already be a vampire, or you may not. “Recently” is doing a lot of work in the sentence, and the context for that isn’t established until later.

There are three religious traditions: Catholic, Reformed, and Pagan. You’re playing Reformed, which has a very Presbyterian/Calvinist thrust to it. Admittedly, the Scotch Methodists aren’t quite so much into predestination, and it’s questionable what an enslaved-by-English individual would think, but the Southerners, the Yankees, and the Hessian are very much into predestination.

Did you go to Mexico with West? Because there’s this graf: He teaches you how you do not necessarily need to kill to survive; with care and an exercise of will, you can feed from a mortal without drinking them dry. This is a necessary technique to passing unnoticed among the humans.

What would you have liked to have had the option to say?

I can add a lie tag, but what third option would you want there?

So, just doing the favor for him improved your relationship with him. The lore is lagniappe.

That said, did you not get this line: "I appreciate your offering, ${mr} ${surname}. Now, tell me, what is it that you seek in return?"

Do you know where this was?

Did you kill West when you were created? Also, did you look at this after you arrived in Vicksburg?

If you went with West to Mexico and you didn’t get Jesse to open up during the rapport scene…yes, this is a continuity error.

I’m not sure what you’re referring to. When you first approach him, you can ask him about the harmonica, about the regiment, what his name is, if you can write to him…none of those are “I’m madly in love.”

I’d suggest playing again. You didn’t make it a full third of the way through the game.

1 Like

Two quick things:

I find it sort of odd that one of the “aspiration” at the beginning of the game is that they want to serve their dominus to the best of their abilities. However, after finishing up in New Orleans, there is barely any mention of the dominus minus a quick “you might him or heard of him”. It there a possibility to included perhaps a few short scenes perhaps where the
MC has some sort of communication with them and interaction can vary on their relationship. This doesn’t really apply to West really.

Also in the scene with Cecil Lynch. If the charm is high enough, you have the opportunity to lie to him and try to convince him to go out into the sun and meet the sun deity Hulitani (Native American sun deity, can’t remember how to spell sorry). The scene is clearly used to “play a joke” on Cecil and the MC is not serious. When the MC is Native American who still worships “sun deity”, it seems like it would be almost like the opinion causes the MC to gleefully make fun of their deity. Perhaps the opinion could be switch where they gleefully tell him about the deity instead of using it as a lie in part of a trick. Small thing but it just seems to contradict itself in one moment.

3 Likes

@Symphony
If your dominus is Padre Carlos, you actually can write to him in St. Louis for intelligence related to defeating West. If you are the Tribune (I don’t know what happens if you are not Tribune), he will personally come and help you kill West.

Fernando de Villanueva e Itamarca can also be supported by MC in St. Louis (although he doesn’t interact with MC) when he is spreading the Revolution to Cuba and becoming Quaestor of Havana. If PC is his offspring, then they get some dialogue about supporting their dominus when they support the Revolution.

3 Likes

That’s a…really interesting point that I’m going to have to think on. It’s certainly not intended that way.

2 Likes

Ah, okay, so those things make sense, and I’ll definitely try again!

Did you go to Mexico with West? Because there’s this graf: He teaches you how you do not necessarily need to kill to survive; with care and an exercise of will, you can feed from a mortal without drinking them dry. This is a necessary technique to passing unnoticed among the humans.

I did get the West line, and remembered it, but I didn’t get ‘they won’t remember you feeding on them’ from it. I did figure it out eventually, so I don’t think you have to make it more explicit.

What would you have liked to have had the option to say?

It might just be because I’ve seen this in a lot of other games recently, but I think I would have been fine with ‘Respond formally’, ‘Respond cooly’ and/or ‘respond excitedly’ or something like that, with it slightly influencing those two lines of text. Just for roleplaying.

I can add a lie tag, but what third option would you want there?

A way of breaking it off without involving a separate romance. I know this sounds dumb, but I was roleplaying as a hopeless romantic optimist, so I guess one of those cheesy lies they have in romance movies (like ‘I can never see you again. I can’t tell you why’).

That said, did you not get this line: "I appreciate your offering, ${mr} ${surname}. Now, tell me, what is it that you seek in return?"

I got that line, and I was happy with the choices I had role-play wise, but I didn’t see why knowledge was the only thing you could ask for when he offered you essentially anything. If it’s because my ambition was knowledge, then maybe that could be mentioned (‘I know you are interested in…’), or if everyone gets that question, maybe rewording it so he specifically mentions knowledge.

This is a large quote giving it context (right after I insulted Jesse about putting gas pipes in his master’s house)

“Is this the child of the beast?” Overstreet inquires. In life, she was a short, homely woman with mousy hair. Undeath has not made her physically more attractive, but she radiates self-assurance and—frankly—power.

“It is,” replies Van der Velde.

She sniffs. “You should be grateful for Van der Velde’s generosity. Taking you in and educating you in the ways of the Society was not something that he was obligated to do.”

“I am most grateful to Heer Van der Velde,” you reply honestly.

I didn’t kill West. Ah, and yes, my apologies, I didn’t check the Quaestors page in Vicksburg. Samantha Withers is listed there.

I’m not sure what you’re referring to. When you first approach him, you can ask him about the harmonica, about the regiment, what his name is, if you can write to him…none of those are “I’m madly in love.”

You’re right, I misremembered. When I went back and replayed just now, I realized that what I found odd was that the choice structure of ‘keep pursuing this path’ or ‘stop now’, which I’ve usually seen in game when you’re doing something especially dangerous. These were the three choices I encountered in a row (after first asking about the harmonica):

“Well, I suppose I should let you get back to your mess.”

“What is your name, Lieutenant?”

“Well, I suppose I should let you get back to your mess.”

“Will your company rendezvous with your regiment soon?”

Well, I suppose I should let you get back to your mess."

“Perhaps I can write to you, while you are on campaign. I would love to hear more about your travels…”

Like I said, I’ll definitely play more. This game feels like it would be a civil war module from Vampire the Masquerade, and I used to love reading through those rulebooks. It makes sense you guys have a deal with them now, I think Choicescript goes well with these kind of stories.

1 Like

Have done a few more playthroughs of the new beta. I’ve spotted some mistakes in Memphis.

In Vicksburg I released Wilson from service. Withers then turned him and he fled to Memphis. When Withers asked me to track him down I told her that it was her problem and she promptly exiled me.

Later, in Memphis, Withers contacted Apollo and he tasked me with finding Wilson. Later again, after my first search of the Pinch, when speaking to Apollo I had the option of telling him about Wilson or keeping him in the dark on the matter. This makes no sense as he gave me the job of finding Wilson in the first place.

Later I killed and diablerised both Dido and Wilson but when telling Apollo of what happened I said that Wilson had killed Dido and that I then killed Wilson at which point Apollo became enraged and murdered Wilson with his bare hands, Wilson was already dead though and shouldn’t have been present at that meeting with Apollo.

I’ve also spotted a minor error in St Louis. In the scene that talks about the death of the Irish firefighter. His name is given as Phemlim O’Toole. I think you mean Pheilim/Phelim (pronounced fail-em).

I’m really enjoying all the new content, I was also hoping someone could tell me how you go about raising your West Downfall score? I always seem to get a 1 on this.

1 Like

governor.283

This was predicated on your relationship with the quaestor: @{(new_orleans_quaestor_rapport > 55) honestly|through clenched teeth}

You’re saying you would have liked a choice there?

Ah, that’s a looping choice. A puzzle, of sorts. You have to figure out how to push forward with the relationship or withdraw.

Why are you saying this is a mistake?

Can you post a screenshot? Really, all of these would be better documented with screenshots. Though I did find Phelim.

1 Like

I would have preferred a choice there. I was probably spoiled because you had such great choices with Samantha and Jesse, where you can really customize your intentions and words:

“You can rest easy, Mr. Whitaker. I will keep your secrets,” I reply, though I am uncertain as to why this requires such discretion.

“Perhaps I should encourage her affections, dear Jesse?”

“I can make no promises, Mr. Whitaker. I take a dim view of lying and deceit.”

“No, he hasn’t mentioned you.”

“Vampires do not have feelings of the sort you describe, Mlle. Withers.”

“I tremble to admit that you are correct, Mlle. Withers.”

“Did you know, all three of these buildings were financed by Don Andres Almonester y Roxas?”

“Mlle. Withers, I’m afraid you may have misinterpreted things.”

“I’m afraid you are mistaken. He finds you distasteful.”

So having a similar set of choices with one or two ‘blocked out’ by your stats would be nice. I ‘stoked the fires of my rage’ with Clotho and decided to never forgive him for her death, so I definitely would have picked an option that I said ‘I’m nice on the outside but hate his guts inside’.

2 Likes

@jasonstevanhill

i decided to replay the whole story with Villanueva as my maker, i decided to kill him yet somehow when i reach new orleans, during de Marigny party the story acts as if Villanueva was still alive considering i killed him the prologue can this scene being rewritten or just leave it at that ?

post it

1 Like

Can you post a screenshot of the error?

1 Like

Ah, Jesse. Well, my priest is not sad in the least about putting more distance between himself and Jesse, a sentiment that Jesse fully reciprocates. Being devout and compassionate, my priest was obviously not going to go along with Jesse’s plot to humiliate Samantha and outright told him as much about making no promises to keep the secret should Samantha ask.

Of course, the struggle for Guillaume’s favor did not help. Unlike Jesse, whom Guillaume apparently embraced out of affection, my priest was embraced for utility, because Guillaume needed his help. Just as well, since my priest takes his vows seriously and would probably have died before letting himself be seduced by Guillaume. Regardless, my priest had to work hard to earn his sire’s favor and did not enjoy certain benefits that his sire might have bestowed had he been embraced for affection. My priest received no help in increasing his status from Guillaume, which actually makes it more impressive in a way, as my priest has steadily worked his way up the ranks, first gaining status from planning two magnificent receptions in Memphis and then sufficiently currying favor with Overstreet that she spoke well of him and thus allowed him to reach Status 3.

As to Jesse, while my priest’s relationship with him is strained, it is not frayed to the point that Jesse would align against the Loyalists, and my priest cares little beyond ensuring this critical point. My priest and Jesse are both glad to be apart, only meeting occasionally as with the caucus or through written correspondence.

It will be interesting when my priest meets Guillaume again in Chicago, to say the least.

3 Likes

Why are you saying this is a mistake?

This isn’t a mistake, I only mention it to establish the circumstances under which Wilson and my character arrive in Memphis.

Can you post a screenshot? Really, all of these would be better documented with screenshots. Though I did find Phelim.
[/quote]

I didn’t have the presence of mind to take a screenshot at the time, d’oh! I’ll make sure to do so in future though. The scene I’m talking about is the meeting with Apollo after the first caucus, which I did not attend. During the conversation Apollo informs me that the senators failed to elect a candidate and I’m given an option that goes something like:

“Come clean with Carothers about Wilson” or “Say nothing, the quastor doesn’t need to know about this”

This doesn’t make sense to me though as in this play through it was Apollo who instructed me hunt down Wilson.

“Rewritten” is strong; I just needed to add another tag to that line to hide it if Villanueva is dead. But fixed now; thanks!

1 Like

One more i just found if Villanueva is alive, during the saliva healing it’s Van der Velde that came instead Villanueva

1 Like

Screenshot?

Here it is

it only happens if he embrace you out of affection regardless of any gender

1 Like

fixed!