@Rohie, sunshine, prepare for an onslaught of devilish details. When I wanted a retreat, I replayed your story and went all Vasco da Gama. Pardon the stream-of-consciousness…
[spoiler]Possible Error: If anything other than,
The passage soon reads, [quote]The baby continues to cry in the god’s arms, its small body struggling in protest.[/quote]
omitting that Laveiby had ever begun to cry.
I wonder–is there a power source in Phoenix? Why else would Athena nest so long.
And then she looks regretful the day before her disappearance. Regret over the kidnapping, the frantic life for the child, the parley with Hermes, or perhaps she initially meant to hand Lavei over…
Head Canon: Auntie was actually listening to Lavei’s recording of Pachebel’s Canon in D, whether it be guitar, piano, or violin.
[Pretentious Art Nerd]I never elucidated on how tickled the artistic point of reference for our chosen face makes me.
The heart-shaped face could indicate:
Admittedly I’m not a great admirer of Da Vinci’s brushstrokes and would assign this to Bouguereau or Harlamoff, yet the Renaissance leitmotif is understandable and altogether triumphant.
If one bears likeness to a Giotto painting, perhaps:
Hard-lined Proto paintings, I am more unclear, though Giotto was the preeminent Proto-Renaissance painter.
For those choosing to resemble the works of Michelangelo:
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At the cafe, an opportunity for an allure check maybe? Such as a couple passes by in which the woman cups your face/pinches cheek telling a more radiant bearer to smile, or an attractive waiter comping your drinks, or a child handing over their red balloon and Lavei ties it to the back of their chair.
[quote]At the mention of aunt Alice, Saint visibly tenses, shoving his pastry in his mouth.
Calypso fills the silence. "Well, she’s mortal.[/quote]
Quite obvious that Saint knew this was Athena.
Keenly desire a chance to challenge Caly on this “lie” after we reunite with Auntie.
Azra never did call us Lavei?
After our collapse and dramatic arrival on Olympus once full powers unlock: Did the noisemakers happen to be on hand to celebrate our capture? How rude. 
I do muse on whether the hospital stay would have included an inquiry as to Bearer’s mental health. A PTSD Lavei might trigger with crowds, people coming up behind them, casually touching them, being in open spaces without a back to the wall, being trapped in a white room for an indeterminate amount of time, floors falling away, overanalyzing, fighting sleep, obsessive strategizing…
Tsss. That statement alone should add 5 stress points.
Taking another gander at the prophecy:
My Lavei fueled by love magic trembles.
a coincidence …
Auntie, say it isn’t so.
Head Canon: A high wit Lavei immediately identifies the Christian tableau of being reunited with a dead relative at the open gates. The irony is not lost on them.
Possible Error: When Athena and Lavei emerge from the illusion, Saint is inexplicably absent.
Error: [quote]From behind him, you can just barely make out Calypso’s form behind him, wearing a matching hood that conceals most of her blonde hair.[/quote]
(Black)Hair and back again.
Ceremony time: It must be massively awkward for Poseidon that he possibly has no child in the trial. No little Ariels to go for the gold.
Error: [quote]You look down at your own uncut palm.[/quote]
Though I had wept and not self-mutilated.
Would be quite terrible if Avery still gave us the bandaid despite not having an injury. If only to salt Santi’s wound further. 
Hmm. Enterprising? Debilitating?[/spoiler]
And for those curious kittens, thanks to our fair author’s lovely descriptions and my fashion obsessionhobby 'twasn’t such a dark death to proffer a list of my muses. In other words, I did it the lounging, lazy way:
[details=Na Lavei Forever]
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Ne Lavei Forever
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[details=Saint]Lucky Blue Smith
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[details=Calypso]Chrishell Stubbs
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[details=Adonis]Charles Melton
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[details=Avery]Indiana Evans
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[details=Sage]Daria Milky
[details=Santiago]Vito Basso
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[details=Psyche]Fernanda Ly
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[details=Aeson] Carson Parker
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Zeus
Poseidon
Hades
[details=Hera]Israela Avtau
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[details=Ares]Clement Becq
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[details=Artemis]
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Apollo
[details=Demeter]
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[details=Hephaestus]Sabu
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[details=Hestia]Lily Cole
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[details=Hermes]Devin Paisley
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[details=Aphrodite]Song Hye-kyo
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[details=Athena]Alyssa Miller
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[details=Persephone]Shanina Shaik
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