here is some typo i found… though i can’t help you with present and past tense problem (my english isn’t really good)
I was lucky enough to be granted a scholarship and given the opputurnity to come here.
___ Academy in the City of Kane was rumored to be arduous to get in. (am not really sure what “___” is)
(choice) I was just on my way to my destisnation
I caught a wniff of it horrendous stench
Standing behind her was a 15feet tall woman dressed in various belts made of out black leather. (shouldn’t it be made out of ?! correct me if i’m wrong)
My body was trembling invuluntary, get a hold of yourself.
I kept his eyes closed, not because I didn’t want to see where it was, but I thought it would hurt too much to open them.
“Great to officially meet you.” Her smile will huge, like a girl who just got a new doll, or a kid in a candy store. (i can’t understand what did you mean by that sentences)
(choice) You should are a hyper fella. (this doesn’t make any sense for me)
The extravagant ornaments, furnitures, painted a regal astomsphere.
Ahhhh! I realized I have uploaded the pre-spellcheck file instead TwT so sorry you had to go through that. Will revamp about the present and past tense problems as well >www< and you so much for telling me this~
Thaaaak you! As mentioned TwT I seem to uploaded the rough version instead of the polished one. So sorry that you had to see so many of the spelling mistakes.
But I get the feeling that the first characters introduced are usually the most important ones, and making them straight is kinda boring. Why can’t the most important characters be the gay ones, for a change?
And I’m not asking for anyone to switch genders; but if I play as a girl, I get Touya instead, which means that you’re already swapping between the two of them based on my gender (if not my preferences).
Yes >www< I love it when the other gender gets their own different experience in the story. Touya is not a genderbend of Tsubasa. >w< He is very much his own person.
Well, they could be gay hahahahaha there were no clear signs that they’re straight xD But I agree with you TwT the main characters are always straight, there should be more gay ones. but I’m worried that I don’t make them believable and alive TwT so I am slowly gonna develop the characters.
Well, I’d certainly love it if the character we met was dependent on our sexuality (or personal choice), rather than our gender (especially if the characters in question aren’t straight). It would also let you add a nonbinary option, since which one of them you meet will no longer need to be dependent on gender.
I was really expecting someone as Junpei as i’m playing Persona 3 right now and since i really like the game your WIP is also on my interest list, keep up the good work
I’ve mixed feelings about the sounds though. The ambiance ones, like the train in the beginning, were good and even helped with immersion.
But some of the more “reactive noises”, like the cracking sounds, were sometimes out of sync with the specific part of the text I was reading and that can be a bit weird.
But it’s not a big deal, it didn’t annoy me or anything.
Beyond that, I really liked the game overall, good luck continuing it.
Question to the author: what’s our creature supposed to be or look like ? coz I see it as some sort of “sonic the hedgehog” kinda character personally .
Um, this seems to be the only one I’m getting in my playthroughs…
A strange mascot seem to have wander into the realm with us. My eyes couldn’t see clearly but it slightly resembled a Fox? Cat? Wolf? It wasn’t clear. It’s fur was a light teal colour, pointed ears with maroon tips. Big cartoonish gloves and shoes. definitely looks like a mascot or some sort.
? coz I see it as some sort of “sonic the hedgehog” kinda character personally