Hey there!
I’ve been editing my game for a few hours now, I stopped weeks ago for my studies on exam. Now, when I load the script of Firefox or Internet Explorer, it just freezes on the first screen.
Hopefully ya guys help me!
I really need help!!
Check the settings of your browser ( I would recommend Firefox ) that they are able to load scripts.
You can also playtest your game in CSIDE
I checked every indents, commands, and symbols, but still, it freezes after checking the first choice!
Can you show us how does your code looks like? Copy-paste your code here and apply the preformat tag `` to let the site shows the indentation.
I’ll also assume that you used the Firefox, so it shouldn’t be your case.
What do ya mean by preformat tag’’?
Sorry, I’m really new here!
Nah, just block your code texts and press the Ctrl + Shift + C combination. You’ll see what I mean.
Is that what ya mean?
Eeh… Ehh… nonono.
I, uh…
Just block the code and press the </> button at the comment toolbar.
What do ya mean about blocking the code?
Just press the </> button then paste the thing I posted ago?
Nope.
Just do it as the way you bold / italicize the text.
I. Am. So. Confused. Right. Now.
Please stay patient on me, because I have absolutely no idea about this.
I still don’t get it…
Sorry.
*choice
#Oh you know, just chillin' like a villain.
I already like you.
Now, let's just cut to the chase, shall we?
I am Mr. Narrator, you can call me SUPER Mr. Narrator.
Feel free to ask any questions along your journey.
Got it?
*goto Mr.Narrator
#It's a long story, it involves a trampoline, a cannonball, and a stupid friend.
All good ChoiceScript games always start with some stupid friend.
In my case, the all-powerful narrator, I am the stupid friend...
I have no friends.
Aaaaanyway!
I am Mr. Narrator, you can call me SUPER Mr. Narrator.
Feel free to ask any questions along your journey.
Got it?
*goto Mr.Narrator
#I've learned the secrets of the universe! I'm gifted with supernatural abilites by the gods themselves!
Uh.. yeah, right.
Someone's gotta lay off their apple juice.
*goto trust
*label trust
*choice
#You don't believe me?!
Yeah, I don't believe you.
*goto fine
*label fine
*choice
#Fine then! I don't wanna play this stupid game anyway!
*goto fakeend
*label fakeend
*choice
#Play again.
Let's try again, shall we?
*goto Mr.Narrator
#Play more games like this.
Let's try again, shall we?
*goto Mr.Narrator
#Share this game with friends.
Let's try again, shall we?
*goto Mr.Narrator
#Email me when games are available.
Let's try again, shall we?
*goto Mr.Narrator
*label Mr.Narrator
"Pfff.. I don't need some prepubescent teen talking about my cool
story rather than studying for a damn test!"
Whoa... uh... you've really hit home there.
Let's just get on with the casual talk, and storytelling, okay?
I am Mr. Narrator, you can call me SUPER Mr. Narrator.
Feel free to ask any questions along your journey.
Got it?
*goto Mr.Narrator
*label Mr.Narrator2
*choice
#But Mr.Narrator---
Wait..wait, wait... WAIT!
It's SUPER Mr.Narrator to you!
It's quite hard for the new players to understand.
It's alright though. I'm a nice Mr.Narrator.
*goto intro
Please tell me this is right.
Hmm… now I can see it clearly 
There’s indeed a mistake I found, especially at the line “It’s SUPER Mr.Narrator to you!” You’re lacking one indentation level on that line.
Other than that, I don’t spot any errors on earlier part. Are you sure that the game freezes upon the first choice?
Sure as the bright day sir!
Still freezes though…
Why does label Mr.Narrator has a goto Mr.Narrator at the end ?
Maybe that’s the problem
It’s all a loop
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Oh.My.Lord.
After all those days.
You sir… are a Saint!
A Saint, I tell you!
You have my biggest (like really big) thanks!!!
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