Oh, can someone please change the topic? Thank you in advanced 
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change it like that? (updated : 30-Oct-2016).
btw, cant report (actually cant playtest it) atmā¦ 
maybe tomorrow.
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Itās alright! Please, take all the time you need. Iām currently setting up the private beta currently, probably be done by tomorrowā¦
Iāll be making a private thread for everyone listed in the Private Beta Sign Up and Iāll probably start tomorrowā¦ Thank you all again for helping me!
Keep in mind, that this is a Big Branching gameā¦ (I actually donāt know, considering this is my first game with ChoiceScriptā¦) This will be a LONG process, but hopefully itāll be worth it 
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here is some report, but mostly i keep skiping the part i though i already read before, so there is a chance i miss something
The plan is simple. The Picard(the one who planned it) acting as the Leadfoot, drives the team from the hiding spot straight to the front of the store. From there, Shotty, Smiley, and Chains will enter the store in that order. (just add space)
He turns to you and say āGo on nowā¦ I need to care of the carā¦ā Waving you away. (did you mean āi need to take care of the carā)
ou resist the urge to look around, knowing he probably has a gun pointed directly behind your head. (you)
You pick him up in a cradle and start carrying him to your room. You lay him down on your bed and cover her with a blanket, before walking around to your side. (him)
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Yeah, we had two Haydens working here before one quited (quit)
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Happy be-lated birthday!
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I love the concept of the game. Good strong characters, a few minor gender swaps on accident when using pronouns. I know it has to be a little confusing when you play with certain characters and have those characters stilll hardwired in your brain while editing another play-through with different genders. Very solid plot, characters, and story brotha! I really wish the game didnāt stop when I was talking to Gabriel and Michael about the next job. Kudos to you man, keep up the great work!
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Thank you!
Yes, the gender swap thing is quite hard for me to keep track.
This game is based on a short story I once published, and I had the characters already in my head as their default genderā¦
If you wanāt to see less gender swap, use a male MC and female Mouseā¦
If you wanāt to look out for those genderswaps, use the opposite
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This story are mind blowing(by the way,who the RO?)
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Thank you!
Wellā¦ I thereās around 7-8 ROā¦
The one currently available are:
Mouse (Out-crew)
The rest are:
Anna/Justin (In-crew)
Charlie/Carly (In-crew)
Hayne/Kaz (In-crew)
Gregory (Out-crew)
Megan (FBI)
Rook (The Outfit)
Kaidan (Out-crew) (Maybe?)
will we be able to romance charlie even if we didnāt choose his sister?
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Heāll hate you for itā¦ but you can sure try to win him back
oh hellā¦ thenā¦ wouldnāt his sister against it? but, i dunnoā¦ somehow i dont believe they get along really that well considering how Anna treat him before- when they help us getting out of jail and the prospect of Justin hacking ability (not to mention he is a HE) is more tempting than Anna mechanic ability.
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Well, thatās Brother and sister relationship for ya! They donāt have eachother, theāre just siblings! Not all siblings that love each other show itā¦ sometimes they may look like rivals, when in reality, they love eachother 
well, i guess youāre right, coz my twin sister really treat me like a piece of crap but im not sure we love each otherā¦ but its satisfied enough if we can win him back even if we didnāt choose his sister 
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Well, my older sister treats me like shit on a regular basisā¦ but she cares for meā¦
And nobodyā¦ and I mean nobody, screws with me without my sister beating the crap out of themā¦
now i have a feeling that Charlie refrerences is from your own experience 
andā¦ guys! i summon you coz this game had some ācanonā gay RO @ParrotWatcher @idonotlikeusernames
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Iām Pansexual, I try to be as diverse as possibleā¦ as non-offensive as possibleā¦ and as open-minded as possible
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well, then Charlie isnāt entirely you irl
and i think someone with open-minded attitide will be able to pull out this task (making your story til the end i mean) 
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