Oh these are just a list of the weapons I WANT to use in the game. Not all of them are gonna be IN the game. I’ll add the common ones, but I’ll still keep the advance and rare ones, because you’re a criminal, and you need some exotic guns!
Just so that it’s out there, I’ve done my research on all of these weapons, even handled a quarter of them irl. I’m gonna be knocking out a quite few of those weapons off the list as I progress. The black tiered ones aren’t gonna be in the game, pretty soon, they’re gonna be filled with a lot more unused firearms.
In any case, I haven’t even shown you the melee weapon index yet… though it’s not as big, it’s still quite large. Same thing though, gonna knock out some to fit into the game.
If you all would like to take a favourite pick on what stays and what goes, feel free to tell me! But don’t touch the C7 or the C14… They’re mine! Snarls
DEVELOPMENT LOG#13 (16-october-2016)
-Added! Second half of the other church escape option
-Added! Getting to know the crew
-Added! Meeting Michael
-Added! Picking the crew
Completed! OPERATION: Church Escape
Completed! OPERATION: The Crew
Completed! OPERATION: Sweet home, Chicago!
-Smoothed out narrative
-Currently using temporary gunfight script (Last one keeps looping) Will replace later
-Currently making plans for private beta
-Added 3 armor tokens
–=Light Tactical Vest=–
–=Light Plate Carrier=–
–=Heavy Plate Carrier=–
-Added 2 weapon tokens
–=FN FNC=–
–=Browning Hi-Power (9mm)=–
-INTRODUCING! New script for getting shot! (… I know it sounds bad, but you’re no superman, nor are you an action movie hero, you are a human being who can die if you loose enough blood)
Thanks! Also, I should note that I’m currently planning to close the public beta since I’ve finished the first chapter. Will update on private beta soon. probably around the 30th of october…
You can see Mouse smiling a bit as she starts to take a seat at one of the couches in the office. (my mouse is a he)
She thinks for momeny… and continues “My family was well known… but not in the way that you’d think. We were not rich, and we are always in trouble. Our family name is like a plague…” (moment)
Your phone ringsRIIIIIINNG!RIIIIIINNG! Your phone rings. You pull it out, and it’s a blocked number. You answer it and you hear a familiar voice. “You might wanna step away from the light post… we’re having a target practice up here…” It’s Gabriel! (i guess its okay for using it once and not twice XD)
“Actually… stay right there…” Gabriel says. “Did mouse bring the duct tape I asked for?”
“Luke, who is it?”
(choice) Give her the phone (should be him)
You look around and you now notice are two figures standing on a small hill overlooking the van and the tied up man. The figure waves at you to come. (its a bit confusing for me, maybe if it’s like this : ‘you now notice there are two figures’ or something like that)
“We were just about to do some target practice… why don’t you stick around and we’ll get to know eachother…”
“Right, they way I hear it, you’ve had quite an eventful day today” He lifts the pistol and points it directly at your face (the not they )
“My boss here still has a few bullets in the magazine…”
“Uuhh… Let me think! Um… there’s an ATM center in Bucktown! They also use use it to launder their money!” (not sure if this is a double use of word by mistake or his stammering while he is afraid)
You pull Luke close and cuddle together. You can feel his body shaking for a moment “Oh… um… Okay…” until he stops and hugs you.
Your muscles relax, and you close your eyes and spend the rest of the night sleeping with Luke. (why did mouse name change to be my MC name when i decide to cuddle with him ? )
that’s it what i found so far and i would like to playtest the private beta too if you dont mind me
Yeah. I’ve been fixing the gender problems back and forth because in my mind, the default MC is male, and the default Mouse is female when I write, and when I play them, I use a female MC and male Mouse.
And yeah, pacing’s off mostly (probably, I think for me) is because it starts being too descriptive and too much exposition. I’m gonna be cutting the first chapter before I start making the second chapter. Just a few snipes here and cut out unnecessary stuff there.
If you’ve got any suggestions please do tell, I’d love to listen. I did say I encourage critics and nitpicking…
@MichaelMaxwell
Hey dont forget me with the private beta okay ? doing reread now btw and You need to improve that Grammar non negotiable im afraid this is very high quality game but that grammar is like red color to the bull.
Edit: BTW you should up the ammount of money in the cheat difficulty. and i think i got bug there with always rolling natural 20 dont working. i think you should set the luck to 21 or 22 for it to work, it might have to do something 0 also counting as number so 20 is essentially 21
EDIT:2 You need to clean up the code. i see 2 Chapter 1 and its going to get confusing real fast.
Edit:3 Could i suggest eastereggs names ?
I got Jason Bourne,Jack Bauer, Michael Thorton, and Natasha Romanova. i think it would fit a bit.
Alright, so instead of just cutting a few stuff, I’ve decided not only to cut a few stuff, I’ve decided to do a complete editing and reviewing of the first chapter. Which means Chapter 2 will be halted for progress. But I think it’ll be worth it.
If you have suggestions for new content or changes, feel free to let me know!
@CaesarCzech
And as for grammar, I really do need an editor (That actually speaks English as a mother tongue) for this… like, seriously…
Private beta will start at 30th of October, I’ll try to be active as much as I can. I probably realized this when I started but it’s much apparent to me now that I’ve bitten off more than I could fit in my mouth, let alone chew.
I don’t know if I should make a new topic for the Private Beta recruiting, but so far the only names I got now would be @CaesarCzech @Curious_Boy
If you’d like to join in the private beta, let me know! So far I’m currently cutting a few things for the first chapter to hopefully making less heavy do that it doesn’t drag so much and hopefully make things more interesting
I don’t feel the first chapter dragged, I really thought it was interesting and I was caught up with the game all the way through in my most recent play-through. Was a little different with the interjection that suspended disbelief every now and again at any moment it seemed like there might be some backstory for the character, however, it worked. Certainly not the best story I’ve ever read, but I was left wishing there was more when it suddenly ended, so I’d say it was well done.
Well, nevertheless, I’m still going to do a re-cut for the first chapter, and will post it before the private beta. The first chapter is supposed to catch your attention, the second chapter is to fuel your curiousity, the third chapter is to fuel your excitement, and only the last few chapters will fulfil your curiousity.
I’ll be reviewing the first chapter and cut out unnecessary bits and add a few explanations if need be and post the update a few days before I start the Private BETA
Speaking of which, I’ll go make a new topic to sign up for the new beta! Helps keep things organized for me…
Thank you all for helping me in my journey to finishing the first chapter! I know my progress is slow, but I’m currently moving from place to place, will be back to Toronto soon, and progress speed will return to normal, hopefully…
Re-cut, revised and edited Chapter 1 start, Al’s grocery(a bit), precinct scenes, warehouse scene, flight to chicago scene(a bit), new apartment scene(a bit), church scene, The Mill scene, and the “Picking the crew” scene
Fixed chapter 1 looping
Mobile Optimization! (hopefully)
OPERATION: Input a phone feature into Choicescript_Stats to review info (20%)
My birthday present is hiking on my own while listening to an audiobook of “Ballad of the Whiskey Robber”… I don’t think anyone’s gonna steal my birthday present
Rook: Yeah, keep telling yourself that...
Shut up! You’re not even in the story yet!
Rook: Not yet, and you still have a private beta to work on... so no hiking!
Sigh Alright! I’ll go work on the private beta!.. thanks a lot @CaesarCzech … but seriously, thanks for the idea!
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and i would like to playtest the private beta too if you dont mind me 
this is very high quality game but that grammar is like red color to the bull. 
wish you all the best~