I’m sensing a theme with these names… The road ahead is going to be a little bit pokey, isn’t it? 
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this looks really good, your writing is amazing 
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Oh, thank you so much! Looking to have a major update out very soon!
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Minor comment–a new scene is almost here; I’ve been having some coding difficulties, but everything that happens is entirely written out. Please forgive my slowness! I think I was over-estimating my coding abilities when I said I’d have an update out ‘every week.’
Still, this is my lifesblood right now 
as my sibling @Fiogan will tell you, Bracken is all I talk about, and any song they share with me is immediately applied to my current universe. I also want to thank them for their support and help with some of the story issues I’ve been having, and I want to thank @MeltingPenguins for her encouragement and help with some of the more tricky coding problems (there will be more; I warn you! x) )
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This is so great. When we were little my sister and I would pretend to be rodents and go on imaginary adventures (I was always a rabbit as a kid but I went with the next best thing on this list: the dormouse obv) so you have definitely made me fall in love with your story. I’m soooo looking forward to more and I can’t wait for updates!!
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Aw, thank you!!! I loooove dormice. Such an underrated cute critter. I hope you continue to enjoy this!
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Is it bad that my favorite rodent is the capybara? 
But the rat is the second best to me, so I’m happy!
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Not at all; capybaras remind me of like… wise old folks sitting at the tops of mountains.
And then they go
Absolutely choice rodent.
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Any chance of us getting descriptions of the RO’s?
Sure. ^^
There’s Artegal and Kundry, whom you’ve met, as well as a frozen-in-time princess mouse from a derelict kingdom. I’m considering a couple characters you meet much later in the game as well, but my hesitation there is that you wouldn’t have as much time with them.
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Not like that. I meant. So and so has long green hair and bright blue skin. They have purple eyes that might indicate royal heritage.
Something like that
Konoi
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Did we actually meet Kundry? I remember their name being mentionned during the song segment, but that’s it? 
What gender are they?
And I agree physical descriptions would be cool. And maybe some personality indications?
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It might be hard to describe them if their species is dependent on the MC? Not that I particularly expect that to be the case with any of them, but it can be done, and allow type specific flavor text, like fur colors, or how big/small they might be compared to the average.
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Aaa, sure.
Artegal is a male shrew with grey hair and black eyes. He will always wear a monk robe. He is pious and uptight. (He has other qualities, but those are heavy spoilers ;p) Whether he opens up to you depends on the MC’s actions.
Kundry is a nonbinary (called tela in this universe) red squirrel. In modern times, their aesthetic would be called ‘punk.’ They have ear piercings and tend to wear motley colors. They’re a prophetic bard and play the hurdy-gurdy. Kundry’s probably the most supportive and agreeable of the ROs.
Princess Hannabelle is a female mouse with black-and-tan coloration (sort of like a doberman; mostly black with orangey-tan markings.) (Minor spoiler below.)
When you first meet her, she’ll be wearing a blood-stained wedding dress and ripped veil.
She can come across as angry and haughty, but also loves pranks and is fun-loving.
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are those all the RO’s? or will there be more planned?
forgive me if it was already posted somewhere; i may have skipped it
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Those are all for now. ^^ I’m considering some later game ROs, too, but I’m not sure, because players wouldn’t be spending as much time with them.
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oh, thank you for answering! None of the them are my cup of tea (either not preferred gender or personality), so more Ros would be nice, but of course I understand why you may not want to add them ^^
the story itself is very interesting though 
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