Beta Testers Needed- Between Two Worlds

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Okay It should work now, I had to make some slight changes to the choice but the story is still the same.

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Hey everyone thank you for all your help and support.

Just to let you know Iā€™ll be on holiday from the 10th to the 24th of June, if you find anymore issues with code, spelling or grammer errors please continue to post them here and Iā€™ll get sort them when I return home.

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Hey guys thanks again for your support

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Suggestion about the game
  1. Save feature still missing, save feature will make it easier to test many branching choice without the need to restart the game.
  2. Choice at the start of the game is somewhat out of the blue, maybe try to smooth this up with some narration.
  3. Some of choice is being presented for reader as third person and another as first person, story like this is better when the choice is presented as first person point of view except in rare occasion itā€™s from others point of view when commenting about MC, first person choice will allow reader to immerse themselves into the story so reader feeling like theyā€™re in MCā€™s point of view looking from their eyes instead of reading a book.

I hope that helps.

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Hey everyone, Iā€™ve been in contact with COG and I am asking if anyone how beta tested would like to be credited for their efforts

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You might have better luck making a list of everyone who offered you feedback on your WIP, then tagging them or contacting them by DM to ask if/how they want to be credited.

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I had to change the name of the game due to the previous being a slur which I was not aware of as its not here in the uk to my knowledge

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Itā€™s problematic mostly in the United States and Canada, where it most often refers to a person whose ancestry is half Native American and half European. It was originally just a descriptive term, but it eventually took on a negative connotation. The equivalent in Australia is ā€œhalf-caste.ā€ Iā€™m not surprised it doesnā€™t land quite the same way in the UK. Thatā€™s not to say, of course, that invasion and conquest havenā€™t left their mark on the British Isles, but it was white people conquering other white people, without the racial overtones that were a hallmark of the age of Western colonization.

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just a little suggestion. You should put the word counts in this post because sometime, people really read things that have 50K+ words. Also, i have tried your game and its pretty good for now :smiley: