[BETA] Interstellar Airgap - Steal the Secrets of the Universe! - Seeking feedback! (ROs in first post)

Ah, there’s the kicker, right? It is potentially a very different game every time you play, which means that the 200k words that total the chapters really means 80k-90k of playthrough (or fewer? i’m not sure). I do still have the epilogues to write but again, there’s 14 different options and so a player’s only going to see 1/14th of the words each time. I’m happy to receive the feedback that I managed to write something that feels different each time, thank you!

I am still looking into the bug you mentioned as well :slight_smile:


Janelle was switched with Alex in this scene


My world goal is changed here, I originally decided to go with Janelles idea of helping out the people and stuff

Shoot! well, that’s dismal. Let me take a closer look

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By the way I was thinking about your game even when I was typing. So I forgot about some small things. Multiple times it said he rather then she or she rsthern then he. Something like that. It didn’t bother me. As game was good.

Ill play it again if it has do many options. I’ll take screen shot this time. Thank you

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Thank you for the kind words! Getting pronouns correct is very important to me so if you do find the time to play again screenshots would be super helpful. If not, no worries! I’ll continue to edit

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Hello! Just an update. I think everything reported in this thread (and via private feedback) has been fixed. But I’m sure there’s a whole bunch of stuff lurking around the corner, so if anyone would like to give it another shot and let me know how things look, I’d be happy to hear it! Thanks for all the help already.

https://dashingdon.com/play/spokes/airgap2/mygame/

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Thank you so much for the feedback from everybody! The project is done, content-wise. There’s still plenty of code optimization I’m looking forward to performing to whittle down the overall wordcount (230k-ish at the moment, but only 15% of it is seen per playthrough). All the issues raised earlier in the topic are fixed–the silly computer loops, the code entry, etc etc. Would love any additional feedback (here, PM, email, whatever). Thank you !

https://dashingdon.com/play/spokes/airgap2/mygame/