Azrael: Chapter 1 (WIP) {184K Words. Action/Superhero} (Updated - 05/04/26)

Can you post the screenshot please?

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Fixed it. Thanks for your help

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Call the moderators. @moderators

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chapter66 line 289: Non-existent variable ‘riverpronounteo’ Error in memory scene in the valley where we meet River. third option

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Does the name of the screenshot include that word? It’s filtered due to spam issues.

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I’ll check but the issue is that even mere text edit pops up the error.

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Fixed. thank you

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That milk drinker line came straight from Tamriel

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Does the game end when we tell John and Joan that we’re okay?

Can you screenshot where the game ends for you?

Hello, I found two bugs. Here are the screenshots and the screenshot of the game ending when MC told the old couple that he was fine.

A small piece of advice, take it as you will. I feel that some pages may be too long, maybe they can be divided appropriately? Thank you, looking forward to the follow-up!

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Thanks for letting me know. Check if the errors are fixed and if the ending has updated

No. its not just that. I can’t even edit the text

The ending for me now is the couple suggesting that the MC spend the night at the farm. (I can’t send images)

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Perfect

Yes, they have been fixed, and the latest ending point is when the old couple invites MC to the farm.

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Is the the demo only going to end here?

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Hell No. We have a long way to go.

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I’m liking the story so far, but I’m getting really distracted by everything being capitalized, except the beginning of sentences sometimes. Is that a stylistic choice?

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Not really. English is my fourth language, and I know I have a lot to improve. Thank you for reading the story.

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