Yo , you good in irl??
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Hey the text stopped at the same checkpoint it was at recently? Not being rude but did the update ends here or did you update something else behind this scene, or there might have been a technical error…
Coding error. will fix it as soon as possible
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Will fix immediately
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It’s hard playing an emotionless MC
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Two major coding errors have been fixed. Now you can access the Update but I still have to fix some minor errors so please let me know when you come by.
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Fixed
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Fixed it. Thank you for being so supportive
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So I have thought about the new update and where this WIP main storyline is going and the Characters. I think one of the things I loved was the badass action scenes, the character background living with their own troubles and stories. I liked how you made River used to be a famous Pope Star but I think she could have been more interesting or important background rather then just a Pope star…like she was the daughter of a powerful organization like a Military weapons business like Atlas Corporation from Call of Duty or a powerful financial bank or part of the Elite to create more of a bigger and more diverse story, rather then the plot being: MC vs Fat Bussiness Men make it more intimate such as River was killed by her younger sibling, or her fathers friends/associates etc! She was from the Elite class and thought about the ordinary people…like how Marx was also from an privileged background, so was Engels was born in a Landowner family etc like a naive princess? something similar to that! I mean unless she turns out to be the next Taylor swift 
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Don’t worry. River is much more than just a popstar
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I’m sorry, i don’t know if anyone already reported this but i found an error (Chapter65 line 46: Non-existent variable ‘riverismale’). Oh… i love ur demo btw.
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Thank you for pointing it out 
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1/12/27
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Huh?
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It’s a date I believe
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The end of the world.
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