Awoken (Fantasy WIP) - updated 16/May/2017

That’s Bioware for you but their stories are still great. You should replay as dark side. HK-47 is quite funny if you go that route, as are some of the facial expressions towards the end :smile:

Dark side too! I wish that they wouldn’t have ruined Revan in the end.

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I tried to, but I just couldn’t kill Mission :’(

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Hmm, I don’t recall killing her… might have to play it again and see.

I don’t think they were ever going to win with Revan in SWTOR. They set themselves up for failure on that as soon as they thought to include Revan as a part of the main story lines rather than just nodding in the character’s direction and giving players some opportunity to indicate their chosen gender and light/dark alignment.

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Even better! You can make her wookiee friend to kill her!:smiling_imp:

Hmm that seems more familiar :smiley: Abusing life debts seems more Revans style :smiling_imp:

Edit: Her voice actor really nailed the whiny teen thing imo :smiley:

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Actually you must use dominate mind to force him.:grinning:

It’s because they made the novel canon. (whyyyyy)

Bioware Austin isn’t “Bioware” it is/was ex SOE/Mythic which is very telling imo. However that is threatening to be an utterly derailing argument so lets not go there :smiley:

Utterly derailing? That sounds like us discussing grammar.

Well, that at least is relevant…

@TheTrueKing, I will be cleaning up the grammar with the next update. Getting those quotes sorted :smile:

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Yay! I have 43% of posts! JK, but I will never stop. Quitters never win!

Small update - well, heavy on the coding but not much to show for it. I’ve prettied up the stats screen, which now shows your skills. And I tweaked some things in the childhood memory bit to add more stats boosts (plus the ever-awkward orientation question)
Stay tuned for the rest of chapter three, and what happened in the ruins!

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drum roll Chapter Three is now finished!
Mostly, anyway. I will admit there is one choice when you’re trying to find the storeroom that isn’t fully written out, but I just wanted to get this posted today.

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Yes! The creatures are dust! Victory feels sweet - I just wish I could have played a bigger part in it.
Those words - a magic spell? I must remember them - I want power like this myself
The stranger has power like this … and yet bowed to my wish. Why would someone like this help me? I have to find out.

The first and last choices are punctuated wheras the last is not. Also, I’m back! (In case you didn’t know that by my post) Also, that means my grammar guy, LordofLA, will be showing up any minute now.

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Leana pushes past you, heading for a set of shelves at the back of the room. You follow her as she starts looking at the contents; small boxes and unidenifiable objects. Harret hovers behind you, making pained noises every time she roughly picks anything up. “Careful! These could be important!”

She makes a excited gasp that draws everyone’s attention. She’s opened a little chest, and now holds a handful of stones. They’re tiny, barely pebbles, but they glow dimly with a steady blue-green light.

The teachers at the school have shown you sourcestones, but they rarely if ever give them to students to use. Understably, considering how rare they are. The Taheryk mages must have known how to make them, but like so much about their magic, the details have been lost to time. Now the stones, which can be used to keep enchantments running without the presence of a mage, are a valuable commodity. This could be even better than finding ancient gold.

She pours them back into the chest, and eagerly picks up another, trying to roughly force open the rusted metal - ignoring Harret’s wail of protest. As it comes loose it slips from her hands, the lid flying open.

Unidenifiable should be unidentifiable, those makes more sense than these, the a in front of excited should be an, the sentence would flow better with commas after rarely and if ever, understandably instead of understably, and the sentence would flow better with a comma after loose.

If you choose to be friends with everyone and go to the ruins with them when you go down, it acts like when you listened to them if you chose to be a loner.
(Unless that’s suppose to happen and I just read through it fast)

You mean you get the same scene of getting into the storeroom? That’s mostly the same for the two paths - though if you’re not a loner you should get an extra choice when you find the stone.