i should have started with something simpler… the coding is killing me
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Here’s my 2 cents and a tangent lol.
Maybe scale back and consolidate features into polls to see what people want to keep, having two linear powers or themes is always cooler than having 50 very shallow powers/theme.
With an example for the concept of powers compare heros vs villains with something like Vendetta.
With heros vs villains you make exactly what you want but you’ll feel the limits when you do the same thing for the 9th time and realize “oh this is it then?” And for the ridiculous amount of time and effort it must have taken it’s underwhelming.
With vendetta however you always have the most creative ways to style on people with the powers you have. When you change gravity you get the sense of how horrifying it is when up is suddenly down, how something so simple will kill someone with an unexpected and unlucky fall. When you use your shadows you get to feel like a horror movie villain as you stalk your enemies.
None of that will ever happen in a game with 60 powers, there’d be two sentences acknowledging what you did then moving on…
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I suggest you should decide one power for mc which actually relevant to the story. Then that one power, later on mc can uograde the power with some modification(something like dnd’s metamagic which modified base magic).
A good example is just like fallen heroes mc, their main power which relevant to the series is telepathy. But they have other minor power like nanovore and armor enhancements.
That way youl can makes mc main power interesting because its tied to the story while also offer minor power choices to please reader who hate railroaded power
Also the 2 world prologue is too much workload for you unless you plan to make it huge project. Those 2 world is different world so starting in fantasy world definitely have different prologue outcome than starting in urban city which means double workload. Better makes one prologue but an awesome one than making two which end up burnt you out from the start. Just remember that writing a book will take years so make sure to plan how long are you gonna finish the book so that you can measure the scale of the story you wanna make otherwise you going to make it too huge which endup taking forever then burnt out without finishing the book. Many wip dead juat like that.
Anyway the premiae is cool but yeah the wip right now is too many branching both storywise and powerwise
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i’ll definitely try to do this. tysm for you suggestion.
yh. I didnt plan well enough for this IF and as i kept writing more ideas just started coming in. I should have made a plan beforehand and stuck with it. Tysm for your suggestion.
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It shows an error message right after i shake the big guys hand in the fantasy world
A quick question. Is the code not finished when the selected RO is female? Cuz it just keeps on loading.
I also foun another error when I chose the selectable RO as man
patreon and public update next week (and bug fixes) 
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