Arceus: Awakening (WIP) [85K words] [Update 26/5/2024]

Fair points. I am trying to keep them vague enough so that you get to know them through the book as opposed to a description sheet. But I think adding sexuality wouldn’t be an issue with that line of thought. I’ll rethink the RO portion of the post when I get the time and see if I can’t make it a bit clearer.

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I’m enjoying the game so far but I noticed a question that feels really out of place when we first meet Juni/Juno. The one where you suggest that they aren’t from the U.S. because their last name is Jorgensen. As someone from the States, that’s a pretty ordinary last name - honestly it’s pretty unusual to suggest anyone isn’t from the US based only on the name (in some cases it’s even considered offensive).

It would fit better if it was due to a slight accent or just replacing that question with a casual “where are you from?”

is anyone else having bad save slot error?

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It is? I was under the impression it is a mostly Norwegian name. But I can add more hints and what not to make it clear it is not solely the name. Thx for the feedback.

Can you elaborate further? Is this on dashingdon or Moody for example.

this is on dashington and i cannot save my game, each slot just says error

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Found the issue. Turns out I needed a bit of a space between the save command and the statement above it. It should be fixed now! :3

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it works perfectly now, thank you so much!

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I’m a bit late to reply, but wanted to follow up. You’re not wrong to think it’s Norwegian, it’s just that any surname is normal in the US since we’re all descended from immigrants. It can be kinda fun small talk to try and guess someone’s heritage based on their last name.

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tried to buy a pistol and got an error

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Found and fixed! Turned out to be an indentation error from an earlier indent test. Should be wokring fine now! Thanks for bringing it to my attention.

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