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Play as a hitman with little who could match them besides life itself, as you try to navigate office politics, cope with the paradigm shift brought on by the agency which seeks more consistent performances and most of all live a normal life with the most undecidedly normal career. Did I mention you may have pissed off one of the more powerful criminal syndicates?
Well, it is finally ready…ish…
Welcome one and all to Arceus: Awakening.
Given I made the ingenious choice to learn CS, and write 56k words within the span of… checks papers 17 days give or take, my creative juices are extremely fried so do please bear with me in this post.
The ROs (Spoilers)
Juni/Juno Jorgensen, A relatively new addition to the agency and the face of your sudden shift in routine, with a chill outlook on life and a hesitant entry to the assassination business, you better watch your conduct or you may find yourself suddenly lacking in key amenities.
Riley Payne, The somewhat unhinged but similarly skilled agent also working for Arceus, with a disregard for human life and a brute-force attitude to all her problems, she is certainly a pain to deal with, yet maybe her rampant flirtations will finally settle on one target.
Isabelle Monet, Text-book airhead with little to no concept of anxiety and a go with the flow mentality to rule them all, Oh and your next door neighbor who you had never seen before.
Florence Labelle, If baked goods could kill, he’d be a mass murderer, but thankfully his complete aversion to violence means that you should only worry about how much money you have in your wallet, looking for a perfect man to compliment his business and maybe finally relax. Although with his strict moral compass, that is easier said than done.
I am really looking for any and all types of feedback, I really wanted to stop and see what y’all think before I make any progress, I’d rather learn and rework this bit than trail off and have an entire novel to rework, of course the feedback includes the post itself, because I am not that good at making topics…
Either or. I hope you enjoy it and have a wonderful week!
Update 17/2/2024:
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Tried to reduce run on sentences as much as can be, assuming I got the definition right. Should be a more clear experience now!
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Fixed an error that skipped every gun related fight scene if you did not take a specific route. (how did this get past me :o)
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Polished it up a little more. So there should be less repeated words and variables that are not properly bracketed.
With this done, I shall start working on the three day rest period leading up to the handler test. No idea when it should be done, but ideally before the end of this month.