Then how all of you could be so detailed lol? You all talking like a current text is on.
What I read shows this is not for me. It is a game that will focused in forced goodie goodie friendship and clubs and romances. All things I couldn’t care less. I wanted focused in becoming all powerful and obtain political power not if Chris Johnson loves mount Emily. Or what is the most trendy color in sacrifice robes.
The covenant ideas look cool. But sadly the rest seem focused in one and only type of player metagamers that only cares goodie goodie and romances.
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Ugh!!! Why does everyone think that’s the main point in the story!? If this keeps up I’m just going to take the whole thing out and have no romance or friendship if people think “why are the clubs most of the story?” Ugh 
Thanks for the punch in the self confidence really appreciate it. And FYI the story is kinda dark!.. I hope 
Sorry like I was summoned here by @Eiwynn I though this was a place were feedback was appreciate not a place was author wants feel his ego.
I have read like 200 posts in last hour and all i read is Clubs romance clothing friendship. Clubs romance friendship clothing … and going on. No story not political setting no covenants.
But not worry I won’t give sincere feedback to an author doesn’t want it at all. I recommend you fixed your post were you asking for sincere feedback and change it for I just want appraisal and fake opinion other info would be replay with sarcasm and veiled insults.
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Sorry Mara - no harm meant, you can yell at me in the PM 
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Now I feel like jerk .
All that information is like very farther along when I talked about the Secret Coven of witches that worship demons, the beliefs of each coven, familiars, and other small parts of the story cuz I don’t want to spoil a lot of the story. I was asking for clothes to help with the character creation and some people were asking about the club system.
I do want opinions but I’m just a drama queen and have zero self confidence and maybe bipolar(according to s test I took online?) which is why asked people if they have opinions or criticism to do it lightly cuz I scare easily and I’ll always take it the wrong way.
I’m sorry if I seemed like that I really am. Ugh maybe I was right when I told myself I wasn’t ready to start a WIP. I’ll still do the demo but I have some serious thinking to do.
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I’m sorry I was being a dramatic jerk to your friend :
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How many words do you need to finish, may I ask, @OracleD3? It depends on, I know, but every chapter needs to finish up to 6000 or over 10000 words.
i would suggest that you come back when the demo is out and check it out then
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An online test is not gonna accurately diagnose you with any disorder.
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Hey,don’t get discouraged just because somebody has had another opinion! You just have to keep going on!Well yes,you have to embrace the bad feedback,but in this case,most feedback that you get is good (for a reason). So don’t give up and stay determined! (Yes I know you said nothing about giving up)
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Uuuggghhh I don’t know??? I just finished the prechapter before chapter one. Now I’m looking for inspirational/ quotes about Paths cuz I want a quote for each title.
Aw thanks your right I shouldn’t pay attention so much to the negative comments when I read more positive comments than negative 
I just have to remember that I’m doing this for the posters that want to read my work and like my ideas.
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I have no idea what that show is lol so old school. But I’m looking for a quote about Paths.
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Wow, really? You’re making me feel old now.
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But…
…ish He-Man…
…their making a(nother) movie…
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lol sorry I know how that feels.
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Oh yah he-man I saw him on family guy lol. I never liked he-man the art style is just too ew for me lol. I think my dad watched it though when he was a kid… or was it thunder cats??? lol I don’t plan on watching the movie tho.
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Original?
Or remake?
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thunder cats
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Original?
Or remake?
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Remake for thunder cats definitely! I liked that show was sadthat they didn’t renewed it even though it was so popular. And I like the art style for the remake of He-Man but idk just can’t take it seriously especially with the “I Have The Power!” “He-Man!”