A Tale of Heroes (WIP) - 224k words. Updated 29/01/2025!

Fear not for the dead, for they are beyond all harm.

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Why thank you dear author, I’m now off to go prove that birds are American spy drones and that how this is all the BK fault.

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Excuse you. They’re obviously extraterrestrial.

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Birds Aren’t Real - Wikipedia

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…Yeah, birds are the extraterrestial beings in AToH.

Totally just them.

Not anyone else.

… Promise.

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This is only going to start the whole “MC has a alien in their brain” debate again. HEAVENS DAMN IT JUAN!

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I mean, technically speaking, wouldn’t the player be an alien in the MC’s brain?

You come from a different world, with a different culture and understanding of history, and you influence the MC’s actions and thoughts.

…Technically speaking.

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Sure, but you’re not in the MC’s the brain. You do not have any limitations on what you do with the character except what is imposed by the diversity of choices. You aren’t an external force to the MC, you are in fact the MC.

Atleast, mostly. You control the MC’s actions and how they mentally, emotionally and physically respond to events, people and eviroment but cannot share or implant knowledge.

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Maybe YOU can’t… :smirk:

Maybe I am possessed of special skills and can in fact do those things. Maybe I was joking. Who can say, truly? :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

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What do you mean by that…?

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Nope, I’m gonna stop right here or it’ll feed into my MC paranoia. You guys have seen it before and it wasn’t pretty.

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Oh, as a side thing, I don’t have Chapter 6 done yet (but I now know every single sanction the US has ever applied from memory, which is super fun and what I totally set out to do /s), but Erineas, bless her beautiful and incredible and talented heart, has finished another piece for me, this time the one that I will have as AToH’s official icon art.

See below the cut…

Unless you romance Ignis. In that case, uh, I live in Florida, or someplace equally as cursed that none of you would dare come to shoot me at.

Icon Art for A Tale of Heroes: The King's Return




It looks incredible. It has a lot of minor details that I didn’t ask for but Erineas knew would fit and she added on her own and it’s just an incredibly beautiful piece.

She also did a Broken King x Blitz Queen version which I have on my PC and my phone right now (hahahaha, you can’t get it), but you’ll have to wait until Chapter 9 for me to show it to you. What I can show you is how a certain friend of mine reacted when I showed it to him, though:

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Suffice it to say, I’m quite pleased with how it turned out. If you can, go show Erineas some support, either with a follow or a like. I can assure you she more than deserves it.

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No words can describe how good they are. Too bad we have to until chapter 9 to see the rest. What a tease.

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Okay! So, before I go to sleep, I actually just got something that really made my night, warming me up more than my fever. :stuck_out_tongue: See it here:

It was done by @Nyah, they shared it over on the Discord but their account is a little too new to post images on the forum, so they gave me permission to do it in their stead. Either way, it looks awesome, I like it a lot, and it’s the first piece of fan-art that’s not shitpost-y that AToH has received, I’m really happy that someone spent their time doing something like this, it’s great and I’m happy and thanks a lot for dedicating your time to my story and the characters, you made my day. :face_holding_back_tears: :heart: :heart: :heart:

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This is gorgeous. Send my compliments to Erineas!

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Poor mc, they’ve already got one alien infiltrator in them and now another one…where does it end? :crazy_face:

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Is this WIP still alive?

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Yes. Just give the author time and they will tell their progress. This last chapter was massive so they deserve a break

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Sorry, I saw this when you posted it but something came up and I couldn’t answer it at the time.

But yes, AToH is still alive! It won’t ever die, I don’t think, unless I am physically incapable of writing. I just get really busy periods, so I can’t be giving updates or anything like that very consistently. Sorry!

That said, as I mentioned a few posts above, I’m about to get some downtime following the second exam period, and Holy Week is right around the corner as well, so that will be writing time almost exclusively.

I don’t know if I mentioned this, either, but Erineas is also working on another art piece, and this one is important, because it’ll be the final page of Chapter 8.

In the meantime, just for a quick summary of what we’re going to be seeing in Chapter 6:

Congress finally starts dealing with the Cretan Republic, and suddenly the weather becomes a real bitch. You’ll be doing some at-home investigative work on the Hero-Monarchs, and we’ll get to deal with the big part of Nova’s problems- at least, his Book One problems. Ignis and Seeker will be mostly in the background, the former setting up the events of Chapter 7 and (unwittingly!) the events of Chapter 8.

Oh, and if you’re romancing Aki, you’ll finally get your day in court with the Major-Commander of 92nd Squadron.

Also, since we’re about to focus on Crete, have a small lore article about something that the writer knows, that Seeker knows, and that several figures also know, but the United States Government has no fucking idea about, and that they really need to have an idea about:

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Seems interesting, I’ll check out the WIP after my Fallen Hero re-read. Also should the author be showing spoilers? hmm I haven’t even tried your WIP my G haha

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