A Tale of Heroes (WIP) - 224k words. Updated 29/01/2025!

Yes, though I guess we can only start them in Book 2 and in a certain order.

@Jjcb ”Felíz Navidad! In honor of the holidays, I present the greatest gift I can: questions!

Who likes Christmas in the gang? Does anyone celebrate a different winter holiday?

Does the League do anything communally for the holiday season? Some kind of office party or something?

What would each League member like for Christmas?

Did the other League members find bits of our clothes around the common area after Lat does her thing? Do they have opinions? Does Seeker still sleep on that couch?

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Most of the team does! Aki finds it an adorably quaint festivity, though she’s only really celebrated it a handful of times. She finds the whole thing very charming.

The only one that’s not really into it is Forlorn- he didn’t grow up with it and doesn’t really buy into the ā€˜holiday cheer’, but Christmas’ Eve is a day of huge feasts, so even he goes along with a fair bit of it… Just don’t ask him to put on the reindeer horns, he’ll grumble a bit before doing so.

Aki and Forlorn do, though I guess it’s not technically a winter holiday.

Seeker actually prefers Jan 6th/Epiphany/Three Kings’ Day to Christmas, but he and Victoria used to celebrate both, they’re amongst his most cherished memories.

Hmmmm, that one’s a bit complicated.

Off the top of my head:

Forlorn would like a dinner with his parents.

Aki wants a lot of toys and plushies and etc, but also, she wants to show her grandfather all the fun stuff she’s learned about Christmas- she’s sure he’d adore eggnog.

Nova doesn’t want much- he can make basically everything, but I think he’d enjoy a meal with his chosen family quite a bit.

As for Ignis, this might sound… a little weird, but she wants to cook. She wants a big kitchen, everyone to get together, and to cook a huge Christmas’ Eve dinner for everyone she cares about. she is not dodging the ā€˜team mom’ allegations, no

Kratis would really like the chance to give up the swords- it’s what he has been asking for for some years now. Barring that, he’d like letters, I think, from everyone he’s met. Despite what it looks like, Kratis is keenly aware of how cripplingly lonely he is.

Mars would like one of those big train station model sets that they can spend a week straight building just the way they want.

We shall have to wait until Part 2 to find out, I’m afraid!

Sure. He just took a cut of your salary to have it professionally cleaned.

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@Jjcb I just read the new update and I’m just wondering but is Lat some sorta exhibitionist, because this is now the second time she’s tried to get it on with the MC in a place that they both easily could and very likely would get walked in on, and I’m becoming convinced it’s 100% intentional and she likes the risk.

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I’m quite disappointed. The main character is a side character to some kinda weird op seeker dude who will steal yo girl. It would’ve been 1000% better as a novel without the MC or Making the seeker the MC that you can shape. ā€œMCā€ is very weak. It’s feel like playing ā€œteam member aā€ that’s a disposable npc. A decent concept though.

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@Jjcb just wondering how close are we to meeting the true big bads of the story like the broken king

since the game will be in trilogies or something from what i have read, i assume he will make an appearance at the climax of first book or something perhaps

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Why do you assume the Broken King is a big bad of the story, or a bad at all? Dude has spent this entire time minding his own business.

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I meant big bad in general

I just mentioned him as a example, from what i have read he has a good potential for being a villain though that’s just speculation

I really suck at being clear so apologies XD

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Yknow I don’t think it’s as risky as it might seem at first. Lat is a telepath so like, she can scan for minds in the area before suggesting anything. We know she likes to use her powers for… non-combat purposes, wouldn’t surprise me if she did a little sweep of the mansion before going down on the MC.

Or maybe you’re right and we need to have a talk with her about kink and respecting your partner’s boundaries, but I prefer the former.

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Nah, though I think that’d be funny. Lat can scan for people, so all her ā€˜non-conventional’ fun times happen when she is sure no one is around.

She also… doesn’t think ahead very much, tbh. See her reaction when she thinks that Nova knows- she completely forgot that there may be cameras in the Mansion and is lowkey panicking about it.

None of this is true. Read the game.

Pretty close. The Broken King will make his first appearance in Chapter 9, and the Blitz Queen will appear in Chapter 10.

You will also learn stuff about Other You, Aki and Forlorn, etc in Chapter 9 and 10.

TBF, ā€˜walking, self-reloading and autonomous extinction-class event’ is probably a bad guy to most states in the setting…

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That’s only a fair assessment if said states are intending to seriously piss him off, like, I dunno, sending a black ops team into a neutral nation to desecrate his wife’s resting place? But what sort of negative-IQ moron would that, am I right?

Between ā€œillegal military operationsā€, ā€œfunding the Sentinel Programā€, and ā€œgoading a terrorist attack in a friendly nation’s soilā€, the US is currently much more of a Big Bad than the Broken King, a dude who has done exactly fuck-all in nearly millenium and a half.

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I’m not so sure that’s the case. Something important to remember is that the (commonly) accepted definition of a state is ā€œa polity that maintains a monopoly on the legitimate use of forceā€. A state needs the ability to enforce its will upon the individuals who belong to it, in order to prove itself the final arbitrer. It needs the ability to protect its people, to establish some semblance of order and a ā€˜basis’ for interaction between the people that live within its territory- and the ability to punish those who choose to act outside of the boundaries that the people and the state have agreed upon (the debate of ā€˜surrendering liberties for security’, I guess).

If a state is incapable of providing these things to a people, it starts to fragment, as local power-holders take up the powers that ā€˜traditionally’ belong to the state. This tends to be one of the first steps in becoming a ā€˜failed state’, and an incapability in maintaining order and being the sole users of force within regions is how countries and empires normally start collapsing. The Spanish Empire went to shit because it lost the power to dictate the happenings in its colonies, the Beiyang Republic (and the Qing Dynasty before it) fragmented into the warlord regions because of the incapacity of its central apparatus to bring its generals under their control, the Ottoman Empire’s long, long collapse likewise came from these factors. Hell, for a fictional example, this is why the League of Antar in @Cataphrak’s own setting is such a disaster: the ā€˜state’ holds no power, and thus the most powerful warlords within its territory essentially all run their own mini-realms, numbering in the dozens, if not hundreds.

You understand all of this, I know, but the reason I bring it up is to explain the calculus going on within most geopolitically-inclined people in the setting: The existence of the Broken King takes away that necessary monopoly. They have no way to contest him in any form, and to theoretically attempt it is to invite mass-slaughter. While they can (probably) realize that the King has not acted to hurt them, the possibility remains that he might, and that worries them terribly.

International relations have advanced to such a point that most modern states believe – rightly, I think – that as long as they keep the people satisfied and content with their way of governing, the state will continue to survive. So long as the economy is doing good, crime is at ā€˜manageable’ levels, and so on and so on, a state can breathe easy. But with the King’s existence, that is no longer the case. The great superpowers of the world are coming to the realization that they exist on the sufferance of an unaccountable being which they have no way to stop, only appease.

This kind of situation is, of course, supremely scary. The ā€˜world order’ that we (speaking relatively here) have grown used to is crumbling down right before the eyes of those who are supposedly its pillars. And while the loss of perceived strength and importance – there is a reason so many empires and great powers have gone down dark paths due to a supposed ā€˜terminal decline’ – tends to have horrible consequences, there is a worry which, I think, is fresher in the eyes of the third world, namely:

When your entire world exists only on the allowance of others, and your leaders are perceived to be reckless and uncaring of that incredibly terrifying fact, rebellion and deposement become significantly more attractive options.

The King’s existence is leading the nations of the world to collapse.

Just as planned.

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While that is true, it’s not contingent on the King (though he DOES bring it to a whole new level). There’s a power disparity between nations that makes it ALREADY the case, and that’s before we go into the other powereds: there’s no credible defence that any nation could muster against the League, for example*. Seeker’s untouchable by anything the world powers can muster, and he’s not even the worst offender: NOVA could send the entire world back to the stone age if he were ever so inclined, and there’s absolutely jackshit anyone could do about it.

*which is why the whole ā€œbring the League under US government controlā€ bill was such a nothingburger; it wasn’t merely unenforceable, it would also effectively disarm the US in the powered front, except for (lol) Darkstar and Mars, because literally none of the League would stick around long enough to even let the ink dry

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Ignore the fact reading is necessary for books and the like, logic is not the forte of the people who keep beating the same dead horse over and over (poor horse btw).

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Hey now, those two are trying their best. We can’t all be the MC with magic space aliens giving us a good power set at random.

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Yeah, that was my point. Their best is trash. Mars is outdone by a drone with an excellent sensor array and Darkstar’s power is literally ā€œI’m a good shotā€. Meanwhile, everyone else that aren’t Lat or Nova can break the sound barrier about 50 times before they even leave the room, Nova can MAKE things that break the sound barrier about 50 times before they even leave the room, and Lat can go digging in people’s brains and make energy her bitch with her mind.

The League is a team of Kryptonians that spend their days sunbathing, and those two are Green Arrow, without the ā€œI’m a billionaireā€ superpower.

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This is true, I think, but there are two significant differences, and that is the ā€˜balance of power’ which currently exists between, say, the USA, Russia and China, and the sheer cost of modern, industrial warfare.

For example, while a place like, say… the Seychelles doesn’t exactly have options, the ā€œimportantā€ countries do. The USA, despite its superior military and financial strength, can’t invade France, or the UK. China can’t invade Japan or Australia, and Russia is currently showing us how much of a disaster its attempt to invade Ukraine was- nevermind a more powerful country such as Poland (wow, how the times change). With how greatly human technology has advanced, war has now become (generally) a bad idea. It’s too costly and the gains from it do not make up for that. That’s not even getting into the matter of how nuclear weapons help to further equalize the field.

That is why I bring up the third world above: those countries are more aware of that disparity and have significantly less options, but the ā€˜leaders of the world’ aren’t cognizant.

Of course. Just because the Broken King is the main star of the collapse doesn’t mean he is its only herald. After all, the Coltello Mechs have been in development since long before the Broken Cult became a thing.

Even if the King didn’t exist, this situation was imminent. But that doesn’t mean the King hasn’t greatly expedited its climax.

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Yknow @Jjcb will this come up in game, what with Mars joining the League? Mars does seem very underpowered compared to the rest of the team, and only really excels in a support role.

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Not immediately (Mars is stronger than Dark Star, so complaining about them doesn’t make sense here), but suffice to say, just because Mars is the weakest at the moment doesn’t mean they’ll be the weakest forever.

Expect their powers to be among the more ā€˜out there’ of the League too, tbh. After all, sharing is caring.

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I think their point was that evidently the mere capability of a much stronger nation to nuke your denizens, which renders government of such smaller countries completely toothless in comparison, doesn’t make all these small nations collapse and dissolve in a hysterical fit. And by extension this renders the notion that mere presence of another entire able to do the same is going to suddenly cause every government and citizen on the planet lose their goddamn minds… very ā€œcartoon-likeā€. Which, i guess, it’s fair enough for a story about superheroes flying around at Mach 50, but, you know.

True, but none of such consequences (if they even extend beyond ā€œthe UN will issue Strongly Worded Lettersā€) eliminate actual possibility of becoming target of the attack. And those consequences are also of very little consolation for people who would get wiped off the map, so i don’t think they factor much in their policy planning.

The thing is that, at the end of the day, ā€œthe US could annihilate us 50 times over and they wouldn’t even suffer much of backlash from the rest of the world in returnā€ doesn’t actually make people in these affected countries stop paying taxes and bow down to their local governments, and it also doesn’t prevent these governments from exerting their military power over their denizens, and puffing their chests out in public and projecting what little power they have over their smaller neighbors. So ā€œthe Broken King could annihilate us 50 times over and he wouldn’t even suffer backlash from the rest of the world in returnā€ … i think in ā€œrealityā€ it would have similar non-effect, for all these countries, with business proceeding as usual and no real incentive for their governments to try to rock the boat, or a reason to collapse, or both.

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