A Shinobi's Tale(WIP)

Ah I see, that sort of makes sense.

What’s the demon slayer related one called?

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Rise Of Hashira
Still very early WIP

GT shouldn’t be considered since it was forced by the Toei animation studios because they wanted to keep riding on Toriyama’s cottontails after he was like “look after the Buu Saga, this shit is dead.” and that’s why Toriyama isn’t credited with GT. But now apparently he won’t work on Dragon Ball anymore because he lost his favourite pen holder.

But regardless, this WIP is very close to copyright infringement and you seriously should do a original story in the Naruto universe if you intend to do so and it can be easily pulled off if you stay away from the characters that was used in the anime/manga.

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I swear I’m gonna start a ninja war if someone hurt my lil’ sis🤣. Also I’m curious how dojutsu works in this game. In the Naruto, it was supposed to be inherited from your clan. If this is also the same here, does that mean we came from a special clan as well?

Also things I’m gonna do in the story:

  1. Practice taijutsu and master 8th gates and invent infinity gates ( 8th gates with no drawbacks🤣)

  2. Join akatsuki and help them capture the bijuus then steal the bijuus from them so I can be the sole owner and jinchuuriki of those tailed beasts

  3. Steal Nagato’s rinnegan

  4. Kill Black zetsu the moment I saw him

  5. Be friends with Itachi

  6. Learn edo tensei then revive Rin and befriend Obito

  7. Start ninja war so I can stage my plan on acquiring rinnesharingan

:rofl::rofl::rofl:

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I hope there is no Sakura in this lol

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crimson blood sama your tale sounds truly ambitious :rofl: :sweat_smile: although most of your ambitions here might be a bit difficult to implement especially due to copyright…i havent decided if i want to include tailed beasts and im not sure how i would go aboutcoding something like that lol but any advice will be greatly appreciated .ill just say there is no plot armour so you will need to watch your actions as they very much affect your npcs including your little sister. additionally each time you train her you improve her fighting proficiency and her feelings for you can range from dearest brother, to stranger from my father and even hatred. spoil her too much and she might gain a sibling complex for you(its anime what did you expect) :rofl: rest assured two months from now this game is going to be packed(hopefully if i dont run out of bread)

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Imagine your MC’s backstory starts with him pooping and then accidentally mastered sage jutsu because of the sheer concentration of the process lmao

Look man, I plan to make Madara on steroids. Both in the battlefield and in the way we treat our lil’ sibling🤣

Yeah. As much as I enjoy the show, the guy really did not treat his female characters well. They either serve as side characters for side characters (Tenten), Thot ( Ino) or a simp ( Sakura snd Hinata). In terms of audience, I think you should check first the rate of genders paying attention to your game. I mean, Naruto is meant for boys so obviously girls will rarely watch it. If that’s the case the number of your female players here will be low. If that’s the case, maybe focus on the male audiences more?

Same man​:rofl: . Aot for me or even if possible…Berserk. I can imagine the title: “That Time I got reincarnated as a member of Band of Hawks under the command of Great Commander Griffith” :rofl:

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please dont give me any funny ideas :rofl: how do you think i started this project

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see it that kind of bullshit that births stereotypes, sexism, and all that.

What do you think I did to watch Naruto and Shippuuden? Disguise myself as a dude or switch personality to enjoy it?

Kishimoto was a great artist, but he wasn’t a great writer.

He didn’t believe in killing his villains for example, which left a lot of his fans frustrated.

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So I assume you’re a girl? Ok sorry, I just presumed that women will not be interested in Naruto since there is really no good depiction of women there.

He’s a good writer at least in my own opinion, he’s just bad at depicting women. They make them dependable to men. Then again, Naruto is a shounen to begin with. Created to pique the attention of a certain group ( namely guys since back then majority of them prefers action manga like dbz) to gain readers than to appease. The same also goes with Webnovel. Most of the stories there are meant for girls. Not saying that actions are exclusive for boys and romance are for girls but you can see the agendas inside the story.

For example, Shounen focuses on male protag. Full of actions, fight scenes but the essence is the protag is a male with a “damsel in distress” romantic interest. On the other hand, shoujo has female protag and mostly surrounded by “prince charmings” that fight for her affection.

So we can agree that anime and manga industry are filled with gender stereotypes and things like that. I mean look at how they represent Americans🤣

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Lmao

Wasn’t a great writer.
What did you write in your life?

Can one of the clans have kimimaros kekeginki with the finale stage curse mark be part of the kekeginki? The bone dinosaur thing is :fire:

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He really isn’t. There are better writer than him out there.

I wasn’t comparing myself to him. But hey, if that’s how you wanna see it. By all means. :woman_shrugging:

I grow up with Dragon Ball, and Saint Seiya. It has nothing to do with how women are written. Once someone create a product they really don’t have a say who gonna read it or play it.

I’m pretty sure it wasn’t the male base that pointed out how the creator of Boruto was sexualizing Sarada and end up changing stuff.

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Never read Boruto, but all the time I see the fan base mention this and call it weird and gross regardless of gender.

This is funny considering she was pretty much the was the most useful besides the Main characters in the Ninja War, she takes over the Ten Tails mind and stops it from killing everyone and kept it like that for a long while.

I get your point and I agree but the thing is, not everyone shares the same perspective. For example, most female weebs hate harem genre. No need for explanation, even I doesn’t enjoy that anymore especially if the MC is a pervert guy. I hate the way they depict men as nothing but meatheads.

Well that’s true logically speaking but they don’t really care either way. The thing is, they still create stuff with the intention of attracting a specific group of people. It applies to all stuff in literature. That’s why genre is a thing.

I suggest you read the manga but leave the anime alone. I’m not one to insult animation but fillers are annoying as f*ck.

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im still trying to balance the clans are there are only two per village and the village name have changed. but ill take that suggestion on my draft board

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Well,Naruto was a thing in my teens and even us girls were watching the Anime but not so much reading the manga tbh.

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Discord dra- i mean
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Kishimoto didnt write Boruto.