Yeah the game end at chapter 4. chapter 4 is missing a *goto_scene chapter5 in the code.
I can’t play the new update. It ends right after the mercenary leaves the tavern.
@Takashi_Shin Thanks! I did take a bit of inspiration from some of their stories.
@HaydenJK @Julasu @Leonard_Gondola @K_T Ok, should be fixed! I forget to update chapter 4’s file, it turns out
Wow, i am still reading it, but I love the small details!
( spoiler command doesnt want to work with me, fixed! )
Summary
i’ve chosen the black dress
“To you, it was more of a statement to Lysander: you wanted him to know that you remember”
it is so perfect ! Thats what i wanted to communicate to them , Literally: i wont wear red like you said, i still remember what you did
I hope wolfy god is just misunderstood. I like the wilder more aggressiveness to them. But not wanting the world to be destroyed completely
Each god wants to assert their power, but they are achieving this in different ways. However, their goal remains exacly the same.
btw, isn’t it also amusing that each of them believes the other one is the fake god?
Wolf, in his opinion, does not want to destroy the world. He just wants to reshape the climate so that only wolf shifters will survive in extreme conditions.
In the end, only Wolf’s followers will remain in the world.
Sunny is a little tyrannical, he seems to eliminate concurrency, and he regularly sends his followers on crusades - i think that is a quite self explanatory word .Also, he took over the Kraken’s region of influence, now he focuses on wolf.
In the end, only Sunny’s followers will remain in the world ( but this time, the world will stay intact, not like in Wolf’s case)
From the Sun God point of view, Wolf is the destroyer of the world. While, in Wolf’s perspective , the Sunny is the real aggressor. Additionally, according to Wolf, Sunny has personally wronged him(??)
I’m 100% on wolfs side. Still not sure if we’re the new wolfs spouse or not. Maybe eventually I’ll try being on Sunny’s side but he did already fail us once soo idk.
I find both gods intresting, i will definitely check both routes.
If I deny the Sun god in the first chapter, I have no problem to risk and cuddle Wolf. ( but i dont really want to change the world into the ice desert
)
However, when Sunny resides in the sword, I have a dilemma to betray him, I dont like to break my promises. He is clearly guilt tripping me
If Mc agrees, they can be Wolf’s “Herald of Winter” , but I doubt Mc could become one of his spouses (?) ( I dont remeber if there are more of them or just one)
I’m guessing Mori is the other ROs.
@Shadyaddams For a perfect moral standpoint, the wolf god did do some wrong in the past, but that is up to the reader to decide. Actually the wolf spouse is just a title (some sort of old tradition), and currently Mori holds that position (if you did not kill her)
@Julasu You can just break the deal entirely with Ateus if you pass the will check. So far no further consequence is planned I’m also glad that you find out that two gods are pretty similar in many aspects!
@No_This_Is_Patrick yeah, I put up a draft character intro in the masterpost, but I’ll probably edit later. It’s pretty tricky to write since she is not who she said she was.
Actually I am wondering if anyone is purposefully failing certain checks (if so, there are … certain surprises for you ;))
I ain’t wanna live in the cold and there is no other gods (for now ?) So Ateus can count on me, as long as his alignment stay on the goodish side I ain’t gonna complain. And I’m ready for the other shoe to drop but so far he doesn’t seem bad compared to the Wolf that want to kill everyone but shapeshifter. I mean in the sense that he let everyone live and so far there is no proof that he wants us to attack anyone but bandits (like with Salacia. Unless I got it wrong Ateus said that they were pirates.) and ofc the wolf followers. At least that’s what “Ateus” say, truth may be different.
I swear if the hand plan is something like killing all the gods I’m going to punch him harder. (That could change tho I love killing gods that are actually evil yeah atheism and all that) Lysander seem to believe that he is doing all that for the greater good. And with how he spared the MC and Ylva I wonder if that was true mercy or he planned to use them. That would irk me to say but, he might actually not be such an awful person. Maybe
Can there be an option that MC have feelings for D, but they haven’t confessed it to them yet?
And one more question. If I choose that MC considers them friend, then I won’t be able to romance them later?
My mc definitely agrees with this part.
But definitely not with this one and that didn’t change after meeting Wolfie, he will forge his own path being no-one’s chosen but his own. Maybe that is mad, but then mad is what almost everybody else thinks of him anyway.
Whatever he does, he’ll do it his way.
@Beth_M i keep coming across points in the story where my MC is refered to as he/him (prince) instead of she/her (princess) when it comes to pronouns. example during the part where the MC dances with whoever is chozen, My MC (female) is refered to as the Mad Prince.
I thought about the adventage of a world without gods, and it seemed nice on the paper, but the more i thought about it the less potential i see. The consequences could be quite fatal.
On the plus side, by eliminating the gods, humans would no longer be just pawns in the great game of boried OP beings. (+)
Even without gods, people will continue to fight with each other over resources, so by killing gods, pitfully we will not get rid of ’ evil’
What would happen to magic ?
I suspect that elimination of gods would negativly affect “magic”.
Every citizen of MC’s country has access to magic. I dont know how common it is abroad, but magic seems to be a very important tool in every day’s life.
Would magic get weakerafter the death of the gods and then later cease to exist? It would be horribly sad.
Seems like a promising game.
You should check the grammar and parsers; I set all ROs to female, and yet in some parts the text refered to them by their male names or by ‘him’ instead of her.
There are few pronouns errors, but nothing that cannot be fixed:
“Momento Mori, my dear prince.”
my Mc is a girl - remeber about death, my dear princess .
Also, I see what you did here author
Has Ylva chosen Mori as her nickname just to say this punch line ? nice one author !
Ahem. Spoiler
Agree about the pronouns thing problem tho
Both my female MC with a female cousin kept being referred as he/him in too many places for me to count.
I admire his dedication to transform a gods story into a freedom story. + 50 main character point
If multiple gods existed my MC would just pick the least worst and profit from her status as basically the god favorite spoiled child. Imma too lazy to rebel against cosmic power man.
Edit : added post here to keep it cleaner
I know right ? Either the gods couldn’t stop humanity from being hunter gatherer or some encouraged it and here the world is. Humans invented private propriety and farming and thus war was born. #sad #uselessgods #jerksgods
@Rani I think you are onto something here
Depending how you interpret it, both gods can be right or wrong. And L is defintely a pretty complicated person.
@Cingulum_diaboli Sure! I’ll look into it. And yes you can romance them later, check notes their true romance happens after finishing their personal quest.
@idonotlikeusernames I think you’ll like the defier route I planned. I’ve always wanted to write someone who acknowledges the gods’ existence but does not believe them in a fantasy world – this concept is just very interesting. And it irks me that most fantasy settings force you to believe in something, like in pathfinder: if you don’t believe in any god, your soul gets eaten. I want to sort of twist the expectations a bit in this story
@Bulk_Biceps @Dreamer44 I am trying to fix the pronoun problem using regex, but it doesn’t work all the time lol. Time to go back to stackoverflow again.
@Rani @Julasu Thanks for pointing out! Should be fixed. And yes Mori is a deliberate choice. I probably make her look too sus by wearing red and naming herself death XD