So I finally finished part of the game (the link is up there), and would welcome any kind of feedback. Thanks!
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Found an error when chosing Stagecraft.
Also I have to ask, but what exactly is the MC studying? Or how old are they supposed to be? Do they go to school or university? Because living in the 24th Century and being asked about mid 19th century politics is like being asked of the Sack of Rome at present days.
I see that you use it to determine on of the stats, but why not use the oppertunity for some early worldbuilding instead? Just throw some facts of what happened in the meantime instead at us when you want to quiz the player. It seems like a good oppertunity to introduce the player to the world/time the game is set in.
2345…yea…im like hey wassup hello…(sry had too)
Awesome demo man! Great story telling, and I love how action packed the demo was.
I was wondering if we would see more of our “friend” 
Gemma in the future?
Love this already…keep up the good work.
2345: Sci-first project is good I like it 
Nice game so far.
Glossary: holopad explanation: error on word “combination”.
Might want to add a link back to main stats screen from mag-ball rules page.
Non-existent variable “technical”.
Last but not least, @Nekumura, you’re gonna love the schools name.
@UmbraLamia
Haha, I see why you thought so 
Is it weird that I only guessed the right answers for the test… and got 3 out of 4 ? History is something I was always bad in… ^^
So far, the game itself looks really nice and the introduction was well made I think.
I got two questions right but I loved it was amazing
I got o out of 4 on the test part
Woah your really good @Terrell_Williams at it then
I got a 4.
I hate history though.
Things got intense pretty quickly.
If you read half-intently, you could probably get a 4. That said, someone’s gonna die in this story
Hope so @UmbraLamia that will be cool
The MC! 
I can’t wait, my mc who is called sonic speedhog has gotta go fast!
Wow! Thanks for all the feedback everyone!
@Sammysam Thanks for the picture, that’s really helpful. As far as your questions go:
The MC is in like the 17-19 age range or thereabout, but it’s deliberately ambiguous… shouldn’t really be a problem later on, I think.
I like your idea for world-building with the quiz, but I feel like that would be disorienting to anyone who hasn’t read the mini-history of the world that I put in the stats screen.
@RyseAbove Thanks! Yeah, the plan is that she (or, if and when I pull that off, he) will show up again later on…
@Terrell_Williams @Harley_Robin_Evans All the answers to the test are in the lecture.
@UmbraLamia Thanks. I just fixed the typo and the “technical” bug, I’ll upload the changes soon.
@Nekumura Glad you liked it. You should be able to find all the answers in the lecture, but let me know if you can’t.
Playing a game set some hundred years in the future and then being asked first and before all about mid 19th Century politics actually is a little bit more disorienting.
Has Bismarcks politics some meaning for te storyline, is it a recurring topic? Because if not it seems at best somewhat random and at worst immersion breaking.
Some worldbuilding would be better just because it is otherwise shunted to the stats screen. And then people may would be more intent on reading through the lecture instead of just skipping it because of the seemingly random nature. Normal history is something you can read on wikipedia, sci-fi history on the otherside is speciffic to your story.
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@Sammysam That’s interesting insight, I’ll see what I can do. Thanks!
I love this so far, can’t wait for more! Especially excited to see what the badlands have in store.
@Xx.Dream.xX Thanks! I’ve been busy lately, but I just started writing the next part.
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yeah am liking this cant wait for more