Writing Structure

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These threads have covered the topic of the repetitive use of second person (you) or talked about the related topic of second person. They might offer some insight.

Using "You"

The repetitive use of "you" in second person

First Person vs. Second Person

What "person" works best?

Second Person POV Writing Styles

Writing POV: First Person vs. Second?

How does everyone feel about a first person perspective?

Points of View and Tenses

Otherwise @Sinnie has nailed the explanation of how to change up the repetitive ‘you’ in these stories. It takes a little practice to change from the formula displayed below.

And these threads have covered the topic of writing structure, both in general and specific to IFs:

Writing Structure

Story Structure: How do you do it?

Questions regarding being a writer - #5 by rinari

How do you plan your stories?

How do you plot your choice games?

Making a multiple-part story

Process of Creating Good Paths

Balancing narrative "Try/Fail" "Yes/But" "No/And" scenes with choices

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