The opener of a French Foreign Legion adventure I’m writing. It’s around 3k words long. If I can get feedback on style, that would be great!
https://dashingdon.com/play/armadillidium/sahara-chapter-1-test/mygame/
The opener of a French Foreign Legion adventure I’m writing. It’s around 3k words long. If I can get feedback on style, that would be great!
https://dashingdon.com/play/armadillidium/sahara-chapter-1-test/mygame/