@poison_mara I’ve been a silent follower for a while - I finally got around to finishing my demo and I’m excited (and a little nervous!) to share it here. I really think this is a great initiative because I don’t want to make a WIP and this is the perfect forum to share my work and get feeback! So first of all, big kudos to you for setting up this thread.
I also think your contest was super interesting and would have love to have joined it but I really don’t have a lot of spare time, in between full time work and working on my stories.
I see you removed your post when you were asking for feedback on - did you still want people to take a look and give feedback? I’ve already had a quick look (as I said, I don’t have a lot of spare time) - I think it’s very innovative and you’ve clearly developed a comprehensive, well thought out world, which is impressive.
I can look at it deeper and send some notes - what kind of feedback are you looking for?