Finally was able to finish the update and I loved it so much! This story is great and I cannot wait for more!
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Nah, I started working on this just earlier this year. Now I want to know what youāve read that so similar to this lol. Maybe there was something I read a while ago that influenced things that I donāt remember.
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I have no idea, it mustāve been this then and just I forgor or whatever, since like, itās not simply a general thing but I remembered specific lines and shit. Like the grass dead underneath you, the gun selection and options within, all your stuff being so worn by the elements. Just the memory of that feels way older than this year. ĀÆā \ā _ā (ā ćā )ā _ā /ā ĀÆ
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Thatās called deja vu. With the dozens of times a year it happens to me, Iāve just learned to ignore it, and appreciate that it happened. Usually, that only happens with things that will be significant in some abstract way, though not necessarily life changing. People will also generally dismiss that it happened, treating it like some other explainable thing. Itās rare, and kinda useless, but now you know what it is. Congrats on your accidental peeking through a fold in time with your dreams. 
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Hello I really like your work! I think I may have experienced a bug and I donāt know if its intentional or anything. When I meet Morgan while walking with L he says a name. When choosing where he says our name, it seem to loop over and over until he says an unfamiliar name. Is this intentional? Please let me know if you would like a screenshot, or something, but I was curious.
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Lol name us familiar to me at least as is some aspects but maybe some wips that had moved on to other formats shared similarities. Its a good wip whatever the case is only encountered some typos in my playthrough.
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Oops! Yeah thatās definitely not intentional. If you have a screenshot that would be great, Iāll take a look at it when I get the chance.
I donāt know if I can send images through here, so if possible Iāll be sending it through ur Tumblr?
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Got them, it should be all fixed now :-')
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Hi! Iāve been keeping up with the game for a while and the whole premise really, really tickles my fancy. And while I do miss the old version, carving the guys face out in the first one was a treat to read and imagine, as well as getting up and being a lying little shit about it, the newer version probably runs smoother with the story. But either way, I LOVEEEE ifs where the mc can go crazy and also be a bitā¦, nahhhh, a massive a cunt, in all honesty, it goes with my persona quite pleasingly! Props to you for getting this out there, Ifās are no easy task but by gosh are they amazing when done right, case in point, yours! The writing is solid and the characters all have their quirks, well-shown personality through dialogue and actually interesting features, deadly underrated features with ROās a mass majority of the time, not a tie-breaker but a crooked nose there and a hooked nose here, funky hair colour et cetera never did no harm and actually brings variety as well as realism! Iām delighted to see where this goes and hope it gets the attention in deserves! P.s I have no fucking clue how to get that second option for Morgan when attacking him and Iām not sure if itās possible. May I please know how to or if it even is? Sorry, Morgan, I swear itās not personal, but it does bring a smile to my face and make my brain imagine cool arse shit. Anywho besides that there are a few minor mistakes I noticed which Iād figured youād want to be informed of!
Tried sending photos but It doesnāt work for whatever reason. Iāll try describing the location instead and leave a spoiler. MC gets put behind bards and the guard comes to take them to the office, gender mistake: āA groan leaves her as you continueā her should be him at least from what Iāve gathered, āshe unlocks itā she should be he. MC uses the gun on Morgan when he confronts him in the streets, a minor spelling mistake: āgiving you just enough time to life your own before he doesā life should be lift. Other than that I adoreeee this so far! Keep up the stunning work and hope all is well, much love! <3
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I got so excited when I saw the demo on the front page of the site, until I remembered it was just a bugfix. Back to waiting for that chat with Morgan I guess. 
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The repeated paragraphs are likely unintentional. They could be a leftover from editing or testing, not the broken-memory mechanic. Otherwise, the demo is solid and the story and pacing work well. Focus on cleaning repeated text and continuing the weird west storyline.
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I just love when IFs let you be a fucked up little guy and I will always make sure people have that option in anything I make, itās just too good to resist. It makes things take a bit longer but my god is it worth it. Same with ROs! I feel like a lot of people tend to play it safe with their appearances and personalities when all the memorable ones to me are ones that take bigger swings with their choices for the character.
With the Morgan fight, which option in particular are you talking about? Iām always happy to explain to people how to get specific scenes they want.
Thank you for the spelling fixes too, those are always helpful!
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Lifeās been getting my ass atm 
but itās coming! Iām aiming to try and get it out around valentineās day, end of febuary at the latest.
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Hell yesssssss, exactly what Iām talking about! and of course, happy to help. As for what part particularly, the part where we āsmellā Morgans fear, and in turn we are given a second option to rip the silver from our skin and let it all burn, which I suppose means killinā time. Hopefully this is enough information! 
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Thats an illegal cliff hanger
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ooo gotcha! I know which part youāre talking about.
So thereās something that will lock you out of that scene in chapter 2. If you get this option in the bar, youāll want to select the option āBreathe.ā instead of any of the other options. If you select any of the other options, it will lock you out of the scene later with Morgan.
From there, when you get to the part with the choice you mentioned, youāre options will look like this instead.
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Tysm! Figured it was something like that, but wanted to be greedy and do both lol. Just came back after choosing the breathe option, and omg Iām so happy you didnāt get rid of that joyous treat of a scene at the bar with the vampires when you choose to lose control on one of them, I very much enjoyed myself reading that beauty again, ty so so much for not getting rid of it! :))
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I have started reading the demo and so far Iām sold. Defs gonna be keeping an eye on this!
Iāve found a few errors and will add them below. If these have already been brought to your attention, then sorry for the bother.
errors
Chapter 1:
Choice ā remain calm (stoic -5)/ panic (stoic + 5) ā is this the wrong way around perhaps?
Check the clearing ā āmostly by the spot your head wasā
Go right, meet Ed and Sloan, fail to respond to Ed ā āclings to their skin and the tanned skin shows through the fabric someā (also word repetition)
Female Ed:
Getting changed, Edith knocks on door ā pronoun error āby the door as he talks to you..ā
Getting the bag from Edith, thanking her seriously ā pronoun error āseems a little embarrassed as you turn to him.ā
Same page: another pronoun error āwrings out her hands as he struggles to..ā
Edith reveals that I died ā āyou give the woman a small nodā
Shy flirt option Do you want me to stay ā āWeāll be downstairs when youāre readyā
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