Hello! After first posting in the Interest Check Thread back in January (see here), I now have a playable demo. It consists of chapters 1 and 2, and I’m currently working on chapter 3.
Description
After returning to your hometown of Golden Gulf, your older sister is brutally murdered. The method? Poison. The location? The Twin Suns restaurant, on its reopening night.
It’s up to you to find her killer. But it won’t be easy.
Between dealing with your hostile brother-in-law, the police force interfering every step of the way, and your own memories about why you left, you’re in for a rough time.
And that’s not even taking into account the weird dreams you’ve been having…
Features
- Play as male, female, or non-binary; straight, gay, or bisexual.
- Customize your sister: choose her name, her personality, and determine your relationship with her.
- Choose between four possible occupations: actor, doctor, soldier, or dilettante.
- Learn more about the history of Golden Gulf, how your family ties into it, and what it has to do with your sister’s murder.
- And maybe stop a cult. Or join them. It’s up to you.
Romance Options (COMPLETE - UPDATED APRIL 25 2024)
Officer Wyatt Pierce (M):
- Description: An officer of the Golden Gulf Police Department. He also used to be your neighbour when you were kids. Time changes people though. Can you love who he is now?
- Appearance: Greying hair - younger than he looks. Massive claw marks across his face, burned into the skin.
- Personality: He’s gruff and tired. Growing up in Golden Gulf, he learned to let many things slide. It weighs on him, made him callous. But then your sister died. Suddenly, he can’t be callous anymore. Not with her dead. And especially not when you’re here.
Officer Casey Young (NB):
- Description: The officer from Augusta, sent to find and arrest the leader of the Burning Waters crime gang, Nina Wu. They don’t trust many people. Maybe you can be the exception?
- Appearance: Faded tattoo of a monkey on their neck; wild hair; friendly, but cautious eyes.
- Personality: They are kind, with a spine of steel, and will always do the right thing. Even if everyone turns against them and they risk losing everything. Make them care for you, though, and the choice will destroy them.
Evelyn Ross (F):
- Description: Your brother-in-law’s administration assistant. Duty and logic drives her every action. To her, love is a silly afterthought. Maybe you can change her mind?
- Appearance: Petite. Lustrous, thick hair. Bright eyes. Glasses. Conventionally attractive.
- Personality: Her calculating mind is her greatest strength, but also her greatest weakness. She’s aware of all the possibilities stretching out before her, but also of the consequences. And it paralyzes her. But reassure her, become an anchor for her, and she’ll lift you up in turn.
Jeremiah/Jessamine Callahan (M/F):
- Description: The sole survivor of the wealthy Callahan family. You grew up with their spouse, Riley. They’ve loved and they’ve lost. Maybe you can help them learn to love again?
- Appearance: Hair braided in cornrows; ragged and tattered clothes; an air of sadness that hangs over them like a cloud.
- Personality: They aren’t afraid to say what they think and have a very strong moral compass. But it can sometimes lead them to jumping to conclusions. Get them on your side though, and they’ll follow you to the very end. 'Til death do you part.
Oscar/Ophelia Lovelace (M/F):
- Description: The interior designer contracted for the reconstruction. Love wasn’t enough to keep you in Golden Gulf. But maybe they can?
- Appearance: Very tall and graceful; eccentric sense of style; an ever-present smile.
- Personality: They project a polite and mild mannered façade. But their true personality emerges through their design work, which they are obsessively dedicated to. Catch their attention, though, and they’ll never let you go.
ROs are still a work in progress. More will be added in the future!
Inspirations
Agatha Christie mystery novels, Lovecraftian horror, The King in Yellow by Robert W Chambers, the TTRPGs Call of Cthulhu 7th Edition and Brindlewood Bay, and Slay the Princess by Black Tabby Games.
Changelog
30-03-2024
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- Updated main stats page (a word)
- Updated Casey Young’s description (a word)
- Updated Lucille D’Angelo and Oscar/Ophelia Lovelace’s descriptions (a word)
- Updated JJ’s description (accommodating new gender selectable status, updating description text)
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Introduction
- Added Storyteller Mode (toggleable on/off in Stats page)
- Added JJ to the gender_option variable (previously, this only affected Lovelace)
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Chapter 1
- Added text to clarify setting of stats + sister’s personality (Storyteller Mode not required)
- Updated Benjamin confrontation
- Removed opportunity to ask Benjamin about himself - moved to chapter 3
- Removed opportunity to investigate sister’s bedroom - this is being moved to a later chapter
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Chapter 2
- Updated to accommodate changes caused by the new version of the Benjamin confrontation
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Chapter 3
- The following parts of chapter 3 have been added and require testing:
- Eavesdrop on Benjamin and Evelyn
- Meet Jeremiah/Jessamine Callahan
- Dance OR speak with Oscar/Ophelia Lovelace
- Note 1: All parts that say INCOMPLETE have not been added yet. There is nothing there. You will get an error if you try any of those options.
- Note 2: The dance section is labeled WIP because Oscar/Ophelia’s dance scene is complete.
- The following parts of chapter 3 have been added and require testing: