Thank you so much for finding that error, turns out i accidentally put unnecessary lines in editing the codes in that section, but its kinda weird as i run a quick test it turns out fine but when i directly look into it that an error pops up, that would be fixed by now
new public update for a total of 110+k words just dropped
feel free to check it out and there might be some minor issues here and there but please enjoy
Is this an error or am I doing something wrong? Eden asks to bring something strawberry flavored and lemon juice, I grab strawberry dessert dusted with sugar and lemonade, but she still says I got it wrong.
@Daibu the story stutter. When first training with Reiren in shadow mountain sect. The game repeat itself. Some entire passages are repeat, two time. I suppose that not what you intent to.
Is this already report ? Do you know the exact passage ?
[Edit] The {b} brakets are visible when the women in red-light quarter appear.
Ugh, can’t you make the story more readable. It’s so self-indulgent. Rows and rows of same text, 20+ ‘next’ with no choices at all (not even the ‘learning this made me feel X or Y’ to give the illusion of choice and some roleplaying option) janky pov swaps, story stutters and style way over substance.
Loving it so far! I love the Isekai genre and getting to play an OP Isekai protagonist is a dream come true. I don’t know if any of this has been brought up already, but I do have a bit of feedback from my first playthrough though.
The MC’s age seems a little low, even for a kid. We’re supposed to believe a FOUR YEAR OLD is fighting golems bigger than a grown man? I would change nothing except maybe start the MC at ten or twelve instead of like a literal toddler.
Some of the training lines with Reiren repeat.
I’d like to be able to do more with the MC’s knowledge from their previous life. Right now it doesn’t seem to help them much or make any impact in the story.
I gave Eden the strawberry snack and lemonade and she still acted like I’d gotten it wrong for some reason.
Hoping this one breaks the trend with Isekai WIPs and gets finished! It has a great tone and I love the worldbuilding you’ve done so far.
To be fair MC is technically an adult even if they have a child’s body but I get what mean. It’s a bit soon regardless of our strong lineage. The MC can do the math but they are too weak that age in this world to be be facing something like that for now. Should probably be practicing with dummies for a while and our mentor.
