I tried it on my pc, but I still get the same bug in the same part:
in other words, I’m really not lucky
which is a shame, because I’m loving the premise of this if 
I love the game so far, the characters (except for the king 
) are lovely and sweet. I did go through the game in an instant and without any errors, I’m looking forward to more 
And your writing style is wonderful 
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Glad you’re enjoying it and thanks for your patience! I think it should be working now 
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Can you tell I usually play as female and can’t get it out of my head that the PC is also female 
Those particular instances should be fixed now, I apologize in advance for this likely being reoccurring problem. I think I’m getting a bit better all the time though.
Thanks for catching those!
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yes, it worked this time, as I said I loved the premise and I’m looking forward to more 
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Sounds interesting
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First chapter and it’s already this promising? Author, this is exactly the kind of story that keeps me crazy over the months. Keep up the good work!
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Thanks for all the positive feedback everyone! For those who missed it, I added some polls for funsies at the top. And for those who didn’t miss it but got the glitchy polls, I redid the last two so feel free to vote again 
(sorry, still a noob)
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Nice. It shows promise already. Hopefully saving that bishop will help later if I decide to join the rebels. It’s not surprising they’re doing it through with how the king is ruling things
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Really interesting so far tho I am curious say grimwaldians heirs where to…disapear in some way would that make the prince or princess the heir and would that be a path you could go down.
(This is assuming that their is multiple if not same question what would happen would the kingdoms merge if their was only one heir what would happen)
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Oh, and congratulations for the baby.
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Now that is a big question that an astute PC may just try and figure out 
(I definitely have plans w/r/t this, but they are not fully solidified and also a bit spoilerish)
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Thank you!
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Very good so far looking forward to more
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Looks pretty promising, loved it!
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To answer the option “Something else”
If possible, I plan to make my character still king, but not a complete tyrant like his father, make a complete reform of the laws and reign more rationally and fairly (be nice to allies and subjects but a monster to enemies) is kind of what I hope to achieve for my mc
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I don’t see why that can’t be possible (if you play your cards right )
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A bit short to judge but cool so far.
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There’s not enough here yet for me to say too much- Haven’t seen how the stats will effect things going forward or be checked, haven’t had enough time with the characters to have much of an impression-
I’ll keep an eye out for any updates but I do want to have more interaction with the father, maybe a small scene speaking to him while in the carriage at the start.
Anyway, good luck with your project and congrats on the baby.
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Thank you! Next update should include an expanded carriage scene 
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