In the land of five kingdoms, the relic chooses the ruler. As the youngest heir and a destined ruler you must deal with a looming rebellion. With a prophecy shrouded in mystery will you unite the realm or watch it fall into chaos?
Play as Prince or Princess.
Choose your own Appearance and skills.
Stablize your kingdom for the war of five Kingdoms.
Take charge and Quench the rebellion.
Romance your childhood friend, General of one of your regiments or Even your Enemy’s son/daughter.
Long Ago, The First human king, King Salva United the Human Race against the foreign threat of other Species. He infused five relics with magical power and used them to suppress the looming war upon the humans. After his Death, the united humans were divided again into five Kingdoms each having one of the five relics of King Salvador. These relics Choose their rightful owner who then becomes the Ruler of the kingdom.
You’re one of the heirs to the throne of Your kingdom Valdra. Your Kingdom Holds the Throne of King Salva. A rebellion is rising in your Kingdom to remove the Ruler and his heirs. They’ve the support from other kingdoms who want the Magical Throne for themself. When you become the ruler of your Kingdom will you be able to quench the rebellion?
“Salvador Book One: The Rebellion” is the first book, in the three book planned, interactive medieval fantasy novel By Nightingale, Where your choices control the story. It’s entirely text-based–without graphics or sound effects–and fueled by the vast, unstoppable power of your imagination.
Updates
A few People(Including me) felt that the prologue and chapter was a bit rushed and too short so I added many new scenes and tried connecting Chapter 1 to Chapter 2. I hope it feels less rushed now.
Prologue and Chapter 1 uploaded with new scenes with siblings, some queens and Love interest
The plot is good. The story will probably be exciting in the future but right now the prologue and chap 1 is quite well written but it lacks excitement(maybe bcz it was an introduction to the world of Salvador)
I’ll reserve my right to judge the story until you release more chapters.
Thank you for taking the time to read my work and for your comment.
I’m still new to coding and gradually getting the hang of it. The first chapter may feel a bit reserved since it’s primarily an introduction to the world, setting the stage for readers. As I refine my coding skills, I believe the emotional depth of my story and my writing overall will naturally improve.
I will try to release chapter 2 next after week after polishing it well.
Hope you stick with us on the long journey ahead.
So far a very interesting and entertaining story I look forward to seeing how the story progresses. And it it is not too much trouble I have a question out of curiosity, will there be poly relationship routes and if so what is the limit of how many spouses we can have?
Hey Kaleb,
Thank you for your review and kind words. I’m glad you’re interested in the story.
About your question, a poly route is not confirmed as of right now but i do have an idea in my head to create a poly route with all 3 romances. Especially between the general and the enemy’s daughter(oof it will be too spicy considering one is your ally and other is your enemy lol)
Interesting but could have more choices and could be less rushed. It feels like I’m not able to fully grasp MCs childhood and relationships because nobodies getting enough screen time. One minute MCs born, next their 2 with a toy in their mouth and then next they’re taking their lessons as heir it’s just way too quick.
I really like it, it’s well-written, the characters (parents and siblings) are sweet and kind (hoorray for loving parents and non-annoying siblings )
The small memory pieces were adorable (not sure if you showed that they are only short glimpses in MC’s past) I’m looking forward to more
Thankyou for the review Elp!
Your honesty is much appreciated,
About the relationships and screen time of the characters, I’m working on that rn and I’ll be adding a few scenes with each of the siblings, some more scenes with Fionna/Finn and the queens. I’d be adding some scenes connecting the chapter 1 to chapter 2 And like you i felt that this was way too rushed.
I’ve read many books of this genre and in each of them it was a fight between the siblings for the throne and all the royal intrigue, so i changed the plot lol.
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