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[WIP] The Intelligencer’s Apprentice — Political Mystery / Investigation (20k words demo)
A king lies still beneath a borrowed crown.
A verdict falls before the truth is found.
The court departs, its conscience left behind.
Yet doubt takes root where certainty should stand.
And you are not the sort to leave it be.
Premise
A royal murder. A rushed verdict. A dead man the court wants buried who may not be entirely dead.
You play as the apprentice to one of the realm’s foremost intelligencers, stepping into a case the court has already declared closed.
What begins as observation quickly turns into something more—conflicting testimonies, quiet contradictions, and a sense that the truth has been settled far too quickly.
The Intelligencer’s Apprentice is a political mystery set in Ozryn—a city shaped by conquest, where the past hasn’t agreed to stay buried. When a royal death is settled too quickly, you step in to question what others have chosen to accept.
THE CITY OF OZRYN
- Patron’s Keep — the castle at the city’s heart, where the demo begins
- Watcher’s Grove — the garden of defaced statues inside the Crown Quarter
- Ashentide — the Ghat Quarter, built around the river that runs through the city’s center
- The Ninefold — named for the nine merchant guilds that have controlled the bazaar district for generations
- The Outer Ring — the ungoverned margin of the empire
FEATURES
Six Playable Races — Each One Changes How the World Sees You
Your race isn’t a stat package. It’s a lens the world looks at you through.
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Human — Adaptable and unremarkable in the best possible way. People underestimate you. That’s useful.
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Dwarf — Stubborn, disciplined, and taken seriously. People assume competence before you speak.
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Elf — Patient and long-sighted. NPCs carry assumptions about your loyalties that you’ll spend the game navigating.
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Half-elf — Neither world fully claims you. That distance taught you to read people. You’ve had to.
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Half-orc — Powerful and immediately visible. You’ve spent a lifetime proving yourself in rooms that decided what you were before you opened your mouth.
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Vanara — Rare in the capital. Exotic enough to be noticed everywhere. Impossible to pin down.
Every major NPC reacts to your race differently. These aren’t surface level cosmetic changes, they affect dialogue, relationship trajectories and what certain characters choose to tell you.
Race-Locked and Contextual Choices
Some choices only appear when they make sense for who you are. Not because others couldn’t take them but because the context that gives them weight doesn’t exist for everyone.
Your background shapes what you notice, what others reveal, and how certain situations unfold. The same investigation can feel very different depending on the eyes you’re seeing it through.
Companion System
You are joined by two companions, each with their own perspective on the investigation.
At key points, you will decide how to divide your efforts, choosing which lead to pursue while a companion follows another. What each path uncovers is different, and the full picture only emerges when those findings are brought together.
Your choices shape how effectively your companions operate, what they choose to share, and how much you can rely on them as the investigation unfolds.
A Cast With Their Own Agendas
A war councillor who never speaks without purpose. A commander who trusts you just enough to be dangerous. A regent who wants the truth but not necessarily for the right reasons.
Everyone involved has something at stake. What they show you is only part of it.
Current demo (~20k words) includes:
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Prologue + court proceedings
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Introduction to key figures
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Early investigative setup
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Initial branching choices
I’d really appreciate feedback on:
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Does the court scene feel engaging or too heavy?
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Is the investigation clear, or confusing at points?
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Do choices feel meaningful so far?
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Any moments where your interest dropped?
This is my first project, so I’m especially interested in early impressions and pacings.
To play the demo, go here: https://cogdemos.ink/play/abhishek-dey/the-intelligencers-apprentice/mygame
AI Disclosure:
No — This project does not contain the output of Generative AI
Yes — This project contains the output of Generative AI
The cover art is made with the help of AI.
