Hello, I have updated this WIP after a long time. Please check back for updates coming soon.
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I absolutely adore all your stories!!! Just completed another War for Magincia run yesterday and will play the rest of the series now. Will this game be set in the same universe?
Life of a space force captain was set in the same universe as the Daria series so I could see it make sense.
Edit-Just checked out your Chatbot and got my answer, a question which the chatbot could not answer was whether you would continue making more games in the Magincia universe, please say yesđ
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The Magincia series is near and dear to my heart, so I plan to continue that in some way in the future, so donât worry, but for this game I wanted to try something totally different.
Thank you for comment. I really appreciate it.
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Hope this gets more regular updates, has actually getting really interested but it ended after I left the smugglers behind.
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Thank you for trying it. Donât worry, I plan to update it shortly. I will update the post when I do.
I have updated and posted a new link for the updated demo.
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No pressure but Iâm curious on whether youâd consider posting your demos on Dashingdon, the website that you are using doesnât look like it has a save system, again itâs your story and I have no intentions on making any demands, also congratulations on the update
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I actually was thinking about this the other day. You are right, it is good for testing since it allows for saving. I will definitely consider it. Thank you!
I added a Dashington link. Thank you again for the suggestion!
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Hi @Jerieth (the Author of this story).
I found some typo misplaced :
Missing "# " before employee numbers 
that error contine till -End of conversation-
-âMaybeâŚbut it is not just the mining operations that have been stalled, all systems are going haywire. I tried to get a drink of water from the cafeteria and it sprayed hot coffee at me.â - Employee 128
âWere you ok?â - Employee 125
Entering mining bay :
- " Several corposes lay on the ground. "
This passage need correction, its a repeat word :
"Alfred hums.
âI am always here, I just occassionally go into sleep mode to run diagonistics.â
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i really love the code door system. In space its the most fun thing to do 
Till next time.
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Fixed. Thank you!
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Updated Demo
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Piratesp/b] - Outlaws operating on the fringes of society. Involve missions related to theft, smuggling, or violence.
Check the bolded text
âHmmmâŚyour traveling to the Beta sector 1 correct?â
#âNow I know your lyingâŚI donât have any friends.â
#âI have no idea what your talking aboutâŚâ (Lie)
youâre
Main Power Core: 5/1
I started with 5/1 in the power core. It became 2/2 when I tried to upgrade it.
You sigh, âWhat the heck am I supposed to do now.â
now?
Nami whistles at Jones who tosses her a laser rifle. She nods at you, and Jones pust his hand on his gun watching you.
puts
I died in one of the rooms when trying to open the door with the bloody keypad. I was trying to crawl though a passage behind some crates, I think. I tried to reload a checkpoint, but then the game told me that the checkpoint was corrupt, reduced all my checkpoint tokens to zero, and ended the game.
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Thank you for finding these! I will look into them.
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Fixed.
Looks like I had a couple of death traps I didnât account for on the first scene. Hopefully fixed now.
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Could someone put wordcount please ?
or @Jerieth could put some number on update 
(i look to catch up after some update that why)
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Great game but i wish thereâs save system
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I have a checkpoint system, but the scenes can be rather long. The dashington version letâs you save.
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Iâll see what I can do. I know one scene is almost 15,000 lines of code, so that alone is pretty long. The issue with wordcount is to separate code vs dialogue.
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