[WIP] Memoir of Smoke and Mirrors (Update 07/27/21)

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This game definitely goes in my bookmark section…It’s so short but I still have fallen in love with the game and it’s characters​:heart: from this point.Something tells me that the story of this game will be awesome!..I am very much interested in reading the next update…Please make it soon…:sweat_smile:

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Absolutely awesome :raised_hands:t2:

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Hmm, I dig it! So far so good and quite interesting. Also, love the artwork characters too :heart_eyes:

Keep up the good work and I wish you the best of luck! :star_struck:

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I need more.

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Thanks! I plan on updating weekly heheh

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Thank you! I’m glad you like them! I was really nervous showing them since I’m using traditional media :sweat_smile:

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It’s really short, but so far I like it. I guess my only complaint is that during the gender choice… for the female… let’s just say I’m not a fan of the color pink :unamused:… skirts are tolerable. But that’s probably just me being picky :sweat_smile:. Anyways, like I said, I do like what’s here so far. Look forward to seeing more and meeting more characters.

Edit: Also, for Corbyn, you might want to change his shorts to just regular shorts, instead of short shorts… I don’t know about anyone else, but for me it’s kind of weird to imagine a guy wearing short shorts… :woman_shrugging:

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Woah, weekly updates!? I’ve never heard of anyone doing that before. Although it works out great for me since I want to see more!

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@VioletHikari
Thanks for the feedback!

I actually agree with that heheh, but at the time I was simply thinking about giving the PC a uniform. May have a solution for that in a future update. Definitely adding more choices to customize clothing.

As for Corbyn, I was thinking the same about that but decided to just go ahead with what outfit he had. He’s wearing his sleepwear under that jacket and seeing as PC and him have more or less experienced everything childhood bestfriends should experience, I don’t think he cares about how he looks to PC at this point. Possibly too that he’s doing it on purpose to mess with PC. ^~^

@Logan_T
I want to do it scene by scene (or scenes, if possible). I find it easier to write fast in rather than slow. I tend to lose focus and motivation once I give in to procrastination :pensive:

@fisheye
Kind of? Something like boxer shorts? Regarding the uniform, I suppose you can say it’s a cultural thing (bosses and owners where I’m at wear uniforms too, although more lenient about the dresscode compared to ordinary employees) and did the same for the setting.

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It’s 2020,people can wear what they want.

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yeah i’m a dude and i wear short shorts sometimes, it’s no big deal. i say keep em

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I wouldn’t mind Playing other characters in this universe how is a hero’s life like? how is a God‘S life like?

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I do plan on expanding this world :smiley: so hopefully I can get to show the answers to those questions here. And if I get the chance, I do want to make sequels (more like spin-offs) with this world as my setting with difference MCs and NPCs

Aleister is actually an old OC. Hence why he’s genderlocked. I have short stories about him and stuff prior to MSM. If this project gets interesting enough, I might share them :smiley: so that’s more glimpses to this world

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I was pleasantly surprised to see some handmade illustrations!

Keep it up… can’t wait to see what’s cooking at that bakery of yours :bread:

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Hejdo

I made a little update to the WIP

Also, just wondering, I’ve decided to sexuality-lock the ROs, would it be preferable if I say them here?

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Yaay!:smile:

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@Brydjette Found this.

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I enjoyed the demo so far NOX , really looking forward to your progress as an author , just dont be in a hurry okay? Take your time in writing this story.

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I think updating that information under the ROs tag at the top is important, because otherwise people will decide they like one and then get to the game and not be able to romance them and be disappointed.

I enjoyed reading through the beginning a few days ago, but I haven’t had time to really put any proper feedback together. I love the concept though.

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Thank you!

@Bulk_Biceps fixed it! :pray:

@Servant_of_choices I will ^~^ the character generation part just doesn’t sit well with me anymore so I changed it and decided to add some more stuff. But thank you for the concern!!

@furyleika definitely doing that then :smiley:

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