Not able to play the game at all
bugchecker line 4 : Non existent command ‘picture’
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Hi! It seems the demo link isn’t working now?
Oh no! 
Sorry I was tinkering with something. All fixed now! So sorry about that
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So sorry! All fixed now
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Yes I’m so sorry! All fixed now
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The story is great and the premise is refreshing as Well as unique, the only problems that I personally feel after reading the demo are
1 : certain factors such as the the ones mentioned above can use some detail as to increase the overall immersion of the players
2 : With all due respect, the writing can use a little bit of polish
Apart from that, everything seems to be great and I’m definitely rooting for this WIP…
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How old is mc ??
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the innkeeper is a former alchemy student.
that’s all I can say right now.
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It will depend on your choice (how many years you spent alone).
It won’t really ever be revealed, But the innkeeper was an adult during their time in alchemy school.
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thank you!
specifically what factors or scenes would you like some more focus on?
specifically how would you like the writing to be? did you find it too simple, or too fancy? Were there typos?
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I love it very nice thank you for your work please continue 
🫶🏻
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Replayed it again, tried being sarcastic, just bitter, and I still prefer being kind and not giving up.
Awww, I love teasing Melon~
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Good start, needs a bit beefing out and clearing out some choices that dont have much effect like the food etc. But its a good Idea 
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Best.story.ever. god i loveeee this game. Saving this! This has so much potential
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Thank you! Sorry couldn’t reply for a bit. New chapter too!
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About the food option:
Spoiler alert:
It matters. I’ve tried to make each and every single choice have a consequence.
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Thank you!!!
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me rn
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but I’m glad the MC is finally freed from the shackles and gets to finally enjoy his life(well hopefully)