I’ve finally finished Chapter Two of Daemonglass with two days to spare before I go to the hospital. The current word count is now 67,111 words.
The latest link is: Daemonglass (dashingdon.com)
Again, the Feedback I am after;
- Feedback on the general concept.
- Feedback on the story - the world, the NPCs, the daemons and, of course, the runes.
- Spelling and Grammar mistakes (I’m writing this in my own British English but am using CSIDE, which seems locked in US English, so I’m expecting something to slip past my checks).
- Pronoun issues - are you getting referred to by the wrong gender?
- Suggestions for options that you wish you had.
- Story pacing: do both chapters feel long enough? Is Chapter One too short or is Chapter Two too long?
Now, I am due to go into hospital this Sunday, 25th February, with my Open-Heart Surgery scheduled for Monday morning (26th February). So, I wanted to finish the second chapter before then, which I am grateful to have achieved.
Enjoy the first two chapters of Daemonglass.