Capes are useful only to enemies and airplane turbines… oh and elevators too lmao.
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i think i just found the love of my life and my next obsession for the next 2 years. Awesome wip 
so eager to see how it evolves
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Capes are a vibe though.
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A vibe that kills tho!
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Whoever wears capes, I despise.
+1 about all the gender references/everything being husky or rough (flirting related ish)
Like I don’t mind how shaking Elena’s hand ended up flirty (since i probably was going to do that anyways).
But others may have wanted the handshake to simply be that: a handshake
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Her father may have broken/almost broke us.
But she can fix me 
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‘The tired, worn-thin exhale of a man who’s seen this same scene play out a hundred times before. Different faces, same brand of lowlife gutter trash.’
Moments like above are in various locations. Perhaps ‘exhale of a person’ would fix this regardless of whom MC is? Easier to fix than script a code into it, I think. Considering there were few in other previous that says ‘man’ in same sentence as ‘woman’.
I didnt get further and wanted to highlight this. Certain there are more. A persons inner monologue wouldn’t use ‘man’ in few locations as a woman. A man could. NBs, I would say it might throw them off a bit?
The architect gives me chudjak vibes the moment he mentions that billions must die lol
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He certainly has that vibe going for him. Only those who are useful will be spared. He didn’t give a crap about his minion dying at all. He just acted like it’s part of his plan since he found us after escaping.
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It’d be funny if someone makes a chudjak edit in which the chudjak looks like the architect lol.
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Someone probably will lol. Funny as heck
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Now that i think about it, why dont the citizens in rakerhills just leave. Like its not that hard just pack yuour bags and get away from the criminals there, is the rent cheap or something?
Damn, this is fire 
Criminals and Villains flock to places with decent population, because it equals more opportunities for profit, more ease to blend in amongst the crowd, etc.
If a good population of city leaves, they won’t just sit around in the city, they’ll just move to the next big hot spot with good opportunities.
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This is a great start to a very promising IF. It’s gritty, it’s violent, it’s edgy asf, and most importantly, it gives us choices! I’m definitely going to pay attention to this gem, OP.
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I really liked the MC and I want to get in the single dad’s pants, but one thing that took me out of the story is all the “this city sucks” stuff. I get it, the city sucks. You don’t have to keep reminding me all the time. 
I swear it feels like, everytime a character talks, is to say how bad the city is.
Besides that, great stuff 
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Lol that gif from that one netflix movie is so goofy lol
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Cant we just spread chlorine gass all over the City to kill the population
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I got Wesker RE4 Remake Separate Ways vibes.