Probably.
hahaha Clone is making fun of MC and mock them because of scholar thing how MC don’t know about foundation etc… and the Clone cant even recognize who is brother and sister so yeah stupid 
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We should have painted him when he got tricked by Leona and Bo instead when he was losing to us.
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Maybe all the clones’ intelligence decreased with every clone made?
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Ah yes, found the “you heard him” hardcode. I fixed it to a gendered variable, DM me if you find any others like that.
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Good work as always.
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When I went to fix this I found I actually don’t mention the word “twins” in chapter 5 even once, so I left that out and had a different reasoning based on if you’re Human, Lunargoth, or anything else.
@Zgg_Fg_hvg_Grffht incredible
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You can’t just mention crusader kings as an inspiration without giving us the option to turn your family tree into a family circle.
It is the law.
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You knew this was gonna happen…once you mention crusader they always come…always
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Bro, I ain’t gonna do the Alabama special with Rin and Jin.
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Cut the incest jokes and discussion, please.
Thank you.
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Another manwha I’d recommend would be Reincarnated Escort Warrior. It’s not really fight focused for now but it’s neat.
And Murim RPG Simulation. That one take a while to get a supporting cast but I like it.
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This is really great!
First off, I didn’t run into any bugs in this current version. As far as the story and writing, I think the story does a great job of creating the feeling of an eastern fantasy/wuxia adventure story with a sense of humor and excitement. If I had to pick something I didn’t like, I would say that I didn’t love Leona. the boob jokes are genre-appropriate but I find them boring. Regarding playability: At the very beginning I found the power scaling for the stats and the inventory/cultivation system a little confusing to access. However, the story progression is well written with prompt moments sprinkled throughout the story that allowed me to explore and learn these systems.
In general, I am greatly enjoying this game and am looking forward to more. I would recommend it to other players looking for an adventure story or to general fans of the wuxia genre.
I did find a handful of grammar mistakes; the ones I kept notes on are:
a missing preposition when Angelo apologizes to MC for letting them get hit by Taio’s attack “I swear to make it up to you…” and
a verb form error when Angelo talks about putting a second seal on the ships; effect should be effective
Thank you for sharing this WIP! I hope some of the feedback helped.
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Always glad for anyone to discover this WIP
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I do see them as my friends.
Also back in the Matrilineal marriage thing, the secret is to marry to a dude who has nothing but is gonna inherit big, the AI doesn’t take that into account as long as their liege isn’t the one they’re the heir of.
That also work for second in-lines who’s older sibling get into ‘accidents’.
Yes I play that game way too much.
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