(WIP) Age of Archdemon [Last updated 6/18/26]

[Sylents]

Synopsis:

After lucifer fell from heaven, he conquered hell and made the first demoness Lilith his betrothed, creating two children. Archdemons. The essence of both archangel and demon fused into a new species more dangerous than both.

The first came Asmodeus, considered the more dangerous and charismatic of the two.

Then came Abaddon. Cunning like her father and sadistic like her mother, she’s more unpredictable than her brother.

You play as the first hybrid generation of archdemon from Asmodeus and the elven goddess, Artemis.

This world contains races such as: Orc, Elves, Night Elves (drow), Humans, Draconian (human or elf with dragon traits), Beastmen, Burr (human or elf with animal traits), Demonkind, Angelkind, Early Vampires, Greek and Norse Gods Post Ragnorok.

The main antagonist is the Lovecraftian mythos alongside an original Lovecraftian species called Azrien (Monstrous Asari). Shub-Niggurath’s last children.

A new Age of Archdemon is upon thee.

[Kristian_Herron]

I like it

[ChaosBringerXV]

Pretty good for an unfinished prologue. The writing is enjoyable and pace feels good so far for a prologue at least. But not much to go on, but that said the genre, concept and what you have here so far, have definitely captivated my attention. So I’ll be watching how this story fares.

SIDE Note: You might want watch out for whole page encompassing paragraphs. Because they can be a bit jarring. Saw a few typos nothing major, pretty normal demo stuff. Also this line repeats. Plus this scene is the one with all encompassing paragraph. So 2 or 3 spacing out would be good.

Otherwise great work, and looking forward to more demon backgrounds.
Cliffhangers…

[Chris_cog]

Very promising! Can’t wait to see all the arcdemons explored in depth

[LeannaMandragoran]

@Sylents, The idea is ambitious and intreguing I like it. The prologue is very good and I don’t see any bugs. I wil watching this. I very like it the story and the stile. I can’t talk about mechanichs yet. Keep going.

[ChaosBringerXV]

Time to enjoy

[Chris_cog]

If all the Arcdemons got into a fight who would come out on top? I’m guessing the Arcdemon of war

[coal8]

@Sylents

It’s my first & quite frankly biggest story I’ve ever written.

pretty well done, excited to see where this goes

[ChaosBringerXV]

Loved the prologue, a bit much to chew. But since it’s a prologue I believe it shall be forgiven. On that note of the prologue loved the unique twist of 4th wall breaking.

Saw some typos, here and there but nothing Super major. Otherwise I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes. Bookmarked and put on watch. Keep up the great work, but be sure not to burn yourself out too.

@Sylents

It’s more for myself setting a base for these characters than anything else

Ah gotcha

[Sylents]

Welcome to the reset.

[DropsCity1992]

looks good but sadly a bit to short to say much about , keeping a eye on it waiting for more like the idea tough

[Tyrant_Evil]

So Vergil’s katana?

[Sylents]

The weapons were conjured from extraordinary individuals. So yes.

[Jaydadon]

This definitely has great potential will be keeping an eye on this!

[Streeter215]

Must finish this this has the makings of one of the best wips I ever played or seen

[Sylents]

So an update…

Chapter 2 part 1 will introduce Ariel & entail completing the initial mission alongside Isa & Jin with killing a sea serpent.

Chapter 2 part 2 will essentially be a long fight between Ariel & either Isa or you based on a misunderstanding. (Subject to change)

Chapter 3 will introduce the last companion. A shorter chapter than the rest.

Chapter 4 will be the longest. It’s the “explore” chapter. This is where the romance & character arcs begin.

Chapter 5 & beyond is the main plot. That’s right. You haven’t even gotten to the main story yet. LMAO

[Kingjo17]

I don’t know what’s happening

[Leon_Kincoln]

This feels like it was written by an AI. My advice would be to not rely to much on already existing concept. Make your own and make those that already exist as a stepping stone instead of copying them.

[dp544]

Enjoying it so far.

Stopped by an error:

[Sylents]

The only thing AI about it are the pictures