Hey no probs, it’s not like you haven’t helped me out heaps of times 
. (Now I’m embarrassed!) I actually wish I had more free time so I could keep track of more WIPs I like on the boards.
Well it is unique (which is a complement!) It’s good you’ve got the text changing to indicate something is happening. Maybe leave the reveal that you have no eyes, ears etc until the second choice? So have a “everything’s dark, formless etc” as the first click, then on the second it’s something like: You continue to peer into the darkness and come to the realisation that you have no eyes with which to see. (Or something like that, I can’t quite remember how you phrased it.) Just a suggestion through, you know where this story is going better than I.