Werewolves 3: Evolution's End - BETA TESTERS NEEDED


Spoilers for the first two games in the series follow!

It’s the ultimate battle between werewolves and human supremacists, and your werewolf pack is caught in the middle of a four-way fight!

Werewolves 3: Evolution’s End is the third installment of Jeffrey Dean’s acclaimed “Claw, Shadow, and Sage” series, where your choices control the story. It’s entirely text-based, 550,000 words and hundreds of choices, without graphics or sound effects, and fueled by the vast, unstoppable power of your imagination.

After years of conspiracies, secrets, and escalation, the fight has finally come out into the open.

In one corner, there’s the Human Sovereignty Movement (HSM), a paramilitary mercenary force, dedicated to eradicating all werewolves, led by your father, Colonel Williams, who is secretly a werewolf.

Opposing them, there’s Packleader Sonoma, a werewolf supremacist who would gladly kill and even torture HSM operatives. She plans to deploy an experimental bioweapon to turn humans into werewolves (never mind that most humans don’t survive the transformation), starting with the HSM.

The US military is fighting both sides, as high-ranking werewolf undercover agents inside the military try to stop the HSM and Sonoma’s bioweapon, even if that means killing your entire pack.

And then there’s Maker, the mysterious scientist who developed Sonoma’s bioweapon, performing cruel and unforgivable experiments on humans and werewolves alike in her obsession with “accelerating evolution.” When your pack fell prey to a mysterious disease that unleashes feral rage, Maker developed a weekly injection to suppress your inner beast. Now, the pack must protect her until she can discover a permanent cure for the disease. But Maker’s true motivations are unknown. Is she your pack’s last hope or its greatest threat? Will your greatest enemy turn out to be your own feral self?

What future are you truly working towards? Do you wish to bring about peace between humans and werewolves, or to destroy humanity so that wolves can reign in the ashes? Choose your friends carefully, and keep your enemies at bay, because the ultimate battle is coming.

Directions for beta testing:

Email us, beta AT choiceofgames for access.

DO NOT POST ASKING WHAT THE BETA EMAIL ADDRESS IS. The first test to becoming a beta tester is inferring what it is based on how we describe it above.

Do not send DMs/PMs through the forum mail system, Discord, text message, carrier pigeon, or any other method than email.

When you send your EMAIL, include:

  • the game you want to test in the Subject line of the email.
  • your forum-name
  • your real name (first and last). Please indicate if your family/surname comes first as well. Beta testers’ names are listed in the game’s credits, which are accessed with the “About” link you’ll see within the game. If you don’t want to appear in the credits, or you want to be credited under a name other than your real one, please let us know.

Do not email us multiple times about joining a beta. If you don’t email us as soon as we post a beta, you go into a queue. As we post new drafts, we admit more people from the queue. Eventually, we will get to you. Some beta processes last longer than others, and it may take up to a few weeks to reach the front of the queue.

When you have been admitted to the beta, we will send you a link, a username, and a password as a reply to your email.

When you have feedback to submit:

  • Return feedback as part of the same email thread where you were admitted. Copying beta@choiceofgames on that email is the best way to make sure your comments are seen as soon as possible.
  • Please send screenshots or copy/pasted quotes whenever you can; it helps us track down whatever observation you’re making. In particular, the author may see things that you don’t, and/or the screenshot may contain more information than you realize.
  • If you’re submitting feedback using the Bug/Submit button in the game, make sure you include your handle/name in the body of the email. The Submit button obscures your email address, and I can’t give you credit for feedback if I don’t know who you are.

A few more notes:

  • You cannot be testing two games at once. If you are already testing one game, send in feedback on that game before you apply to another. If you apply for multiple games at the same time, you will likely be admitted first to whichever game has testing slots open up first, and we won’t be able to admit you to the other one until you send in your comments for that one. (From an admin standpoint, it’s easiest if you don’t apply to more than one game at once – applying to multiple games makes it more likely that we’ll miss admitting you to one of them.)
  • If you’re admitted as a tester but realize you won’t be able to send in feedback for that game, please let us know! You won’t be penalized in any way - we’ll just take you off the list of testers for that game. But if you sign up to test a game and don’t send comments or withdraw, it will affect your chances of being admitted to future betas.
  • There’s no standard length of time for a beta testing period to last, and we usually don’t know exactly how long a game will be in beta when it opens. The best way to know how long a beta will be open is to follow the thread for updates.
  • It’s fine to send multiple feedback emails, but if you have a lot of quick comments, it’s easier to keep track of them if you bundle them into one email.

Tips on How to Give Feedback

We’re looking for “high level” and “low level” feedback. Not mid-level feedback.

Low-level = typos and continuity errors. A continuity error is when a character’s gender flips, or someone comes back from the dead, or you run into a plotline that just doesn’t make sense (because it’s probably a coding error). For these low-level issues, screenshots are very helpful. If you see a problem, take a screenshot, or copy and paste the text that is in error, and email that.

“High level” feedback has to do with things like plot, pacing, and characters. “Scene A didn’t work for me because x, y, and z,” is useful feedback. “B character was entirely unsympathetic, because u, w, and v,” is also useful feedback.

“Mid-level” feedback describes things like grammar, style, word choice, or the use of commas. As I said above, I do not want mid-level feedback. In particular, DO NOT WRITE TO ME ABOUT COMMAS.

“I had a great time and saw only a few spelling errors,” is not useful feedback. In fact, it’s the sort of thing that results in you not being given access to future betas.

Some examples of useful feedback :

  • In Choice of the Dragon, you get to choose what type of wings you have: leather or scaled. Someone wrote in and asked about having feathered wings. Great suggestion! Done!
  • In “The Eagle’s Heir,” someone asked about Eugenie. They said that the romance moved too quickly–because she only appeared in the last third of the game–and wished they could have had an opportunity to meet her earlier. So the authors added an opportunity to meet her and start the romance earlier in the game (in a scene that already existed).
  • In “Demon Mark: A Russian Saga” several people commented on how the PC’s parents were unsympathetic, so the authors added a choice or two to deepen the relationship with the parents in the first chapter, to help better establish their characters.
  • Pointing out a specific choice and saying, “this is who I imagined my character was at this particular moment, and none of these options seemed right for me. I would have liked an option to do X instead,” is also really helpful feedback.
  • If you choose an #option and then the results of that #option don’t make sense. Like, if you thought an #option might test one stat, but it seems to have tested a different one.
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Changelog

  • Many various typos fixed.
  • Fixed a very embarrassing bug where Lapu confesses that he loves you instead of your RO. Blessed be the beta testers!
  • Fixed sonomas_wolves stat mixed with rebellion_rep
  • Hijacking a truck while romancing Jolon no longer results in there being 2 different Jolons running about.
  • No longer able to re-do Stortregn side quest
  • Fix to recap w/ supporting Ahote in werewolves 2
  • Fix recap, Warden Washburn alive/dead
  • Fix recap, re: Wilu’s survival
  • Fixed new reader recap so if player kills Tayla they can no longer interrogate her later.
  • Bly seemed to be wishing the MC dead instead of Sonoma in the prologue. Clarified.
  • Removed ability to revisit the dojo a third time and get the same text.
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  • Dozens of grammar fixes and minor continuity errors patched.
  • Added a chance to forgive Lapu or decide otherwise.
  • Added a short talk with Anna about Justin and whether or not he survived Haven in book 1.
  • Some expanded Jolon relationship content.
  • Alt dialog if you met Winter at the arena before running into her in the junk room.
  • Explained in more detail why the MC sleeps in their own room while in the facility and not with their RO.
  • MC no longer believes Lapu died if he wasn’t explicitly seen dying.
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  • Misc spelling and grammar fixes
  • Chapter 5, in the security room, Kotori is no longer replaced by another character if he’s your RO.
  • Some new alt text for the player dealing with Lapu depending on his relationship stat
  • Rivera prologue: if you discover the passcode on your own, Lapu takes your advice instead of opening it himself.
  • Removed the game calling every newly created MC a ‘Student’ on the stats page.
  • Added the pre-made character names to the quick character builder.
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