Was meant to be,forgot most people have problems with him right now.
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Thatās great! I canāt wait to see how this story goes.
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Glad you like it! Thanks for the feedback!
YAAAAY, Iāve been looking for a project like this. Will we be able to have a anti-hero character and are you planning to make a play through long or short since we do get a lot of different ways to play. My experience with playing books that have a high word count yet each individual play through is short, Iāve personally not liked them
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Glad you like it so far! You will be able to tune your characterās persona however you choose, and the personality stats will have a major impact on the path the MC takes. As an estimate, each play through will have between 50k-60k words. Itās quite a long game. I have it story boarded, and outlined, and I am fully aware that the coding for such a project will be quite the task, but I feel that anything worth doing, is worth doing well. Hopefully you will enjoy the results!
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An error happens after you meet quinn and choose the option of your rivalry pushes to improve abilities.
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Thanks for letting me know! It should be corrected now.
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I really liked this! It was cool seeing other enhanced figuresā stories and Iām excited for more!! Good luck!! 
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Thanks for the feedback! Next update coming soonš
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Oooh, soon? Iām already excited.
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I could see the use of being able to control peopleās emotions especially if you helped during the tithe making everyone around you happy to work and give everything just because you said so.
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The demo has been updated as of 05/26/18.
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While I enjoyed the read. I do agree the part with all the decisions can be mildly inconvenient, but at the same time I also dislike quickly selecting archetypes as I like to closely personalize my character. Just a thought, but maybe you could do either a questionnaire like a personality test or have much shortened descriptions with the same choices as the original start to the game instead? Enough for you to form a quick opinion of how you feel about it before making your choice?
Aside from that. I really loved the start. I enjoyed reading every bit. Though I am curious. I only read through it once, but Iām curious if you have any Shadow / Darkness based powers possibly? Like turning yourself into shadowy mist or manipulating peoples shadows etc. Shoot whats it called uhā¦ INSERT SNAPPING FINGERS HERE Umbral Kinetics maybe? I think thatās it. I like that sort of stuff the most though, it seems really interesting to me!
Beyond that I look forward to seeing where you go with this. 
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Perhaps mark the classes by number?
So choose first class, second class, third class, etc?
As it was, I wasnāt sure there wasnāt a game bug and that Iād be choosing courses til the end of time.
And are we supposed to be able to choose the same class more than once? Previously chosen courses werenāt greyed out.
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Thanks for taking the time to let me know what you thought! I see that you mentioned you read through only once, did you try using the skip options? They provide short queries that bypass the introductory portion. Are you suggesting something other than this? In regards to your question about the powers, shadow abilities are not one of the options, however, you can achieve a similar effect with some of the other abilities.
Thanks for the feedback! The āadd this course to my scheduleā option should be grayed out if you have already added said course, was this not the case? If not, which options were you allowed to select multiple times? Additionally, the instructions given by Nex inform you that you will be selecting nine courses, was this dialogue missing during your play through? If so, which section did you read last before the class schedule selection?
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Iām really liking the direction of this, how long do you plan on making the schooling or Will we not finish āschoolā and overall is the book going to be short medium long or even better yet will their be sequels.
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I donāt think you should upload if itās gonna so short. You should uplad when the chapters are longer imo.
And yea, school option didnāt gray out after selecting them.
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I didnāt get that far, I didnāt try to choose the same course again.
Unless thereās a āCancel this previously chosen classā option, Iād suggest greying out previously chosen classes from the list of classes page.
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Yup, thought it was a bug.
I think the text where you choose class needs to be clearer, because I thought I was stuck at the first item every time. 
Luckily I was so stubborn I kept selecting things and eventually the game seemed satisfied. 
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