Nice It’s actually intriguing I started it and it was more like it shouldn’t end. I don’t know about others but am sure they would be anticipating more update likewise me.
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This has come a really long way since the last time I saw it. Keep up the good work!
I understand what you’re saying, but you’re right, Stella is just a child; she doesn’t truly understand; she loves her father and thinks everyone is like him and only sees the good in everyone, that’s why she’s defending him.
I can Still edit the last line to something less problematic.
Thank you for bringing this to my attention.
I really like the story and looking forward to the coming updates.
I am sold
Men getting angry at their wives for giving birth to daughters and not sons always amuses me, since genetically, it’s the sperm that determines gender. So it’s always the males fault
It’s not actually anyone’s fault since…y’know there’s no “character customisation” in the…baby making process.
My people!
Here is my plan for this year. I will be busy for the next month then I will be free to write.
Sounds good idk why but im already hook on this book
I would recommend you including an update log to record update details like last updated etc for this current project so we can keep track of updates regarding this specific work. I believe a lot of individual here would agree with me on this.
It’s just a recommendation I believe would come in handy .
You’re right, this is something I will do before the next update which, will include the rest of chapter 1 and chapter 2.
I’m sucker for fantasy, this is nice beginning
Looking at the pictures of the royal families, why do the queens look younger than their children? The only exception is Queen Arabella of Aliech. Other than her, they’ve all got the same impossibly youthful face. I think you might have to fiddle with the AI generator for more diverse results.
Prince Robyn looks like he’s ready to do some horrible deeds…
curious and curiouser, I like it, it has an interesting beginnig, summary is intriguing, looking forward to how you will shape this story.
10 RO… How many books are you planning for this game?
I’m still thinking about that, will decide after writing a few chapters.
I like the demo so far and it’s such an interesting premise. I am looking forward for the future chapters.
I have a question though… Is there a particular reason many characters have purple eyes? cool aesthetics? magic? I hope the answer doesn’t spoil anything!
I do love my low fantasy stories it is great to see so many Hosted games focus on the setting,content is blooming which is awesome.
Wasn’t a fan of the overall introduction,with the dream and all that stuff,the family’s first scenes were not explanatory and it gave me a sense of a lost opportunity,as the game seems to be about the political intricacies of Eren(isn’t it a peninsula being surrounded by water on all sides except one?) painting such an abstract first picture fails to capture readers right at the very start.
Yes there are supernatural elements on the plot and a certain sense of mystery I get it but we got all of that without actual easy to get lore and content,so balancing these aspects would help for anyone who checks the content to understand it.
The gods roaming the character’s mind were not the best addition to the narrative,felt it as an awkward continuation and I understand somewhat the importance of their presence for the future of the plot but their appearances on the dialogue didn’t shine being a confusing or straight up alien most of the time.
Also a general question,What are your main objectives for the narrative?
For example do you intend any of this?
A unification of Eren(Empire Building),The chance of forming our family(having our own husband/wife/wives plus children),carving alliances,Castle intrigue and international politics,Kingdom development/management,discovering dark goldly lore…
