I’m sorry it’s on the part when Merric tell me to go get the doctor it’s says line 437: can’t fairadd to non- percentile value: -9
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I went back and fixed it and its working fine on my end. Is it working for you now?
All clear thank you
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Sure thing!
@Fusion_Ultimatum I feel a lots of scenes and dialogues extremely odd and moat of them annoying too…
I chose female MC yet MC’s thoughts and dialogues sound like she isn’t…
My point is that this entire thing FEELS LIKE male locked with simply female pronouns added as a flavour for MC like an after thought instead of a female perspective. The entire thing feels like I’m reading male locked story with a female character.
Sir Alexander and everyone keeps referring to MC as lad [added this cause, there’s specifically lad/lass in code yet it looks like you haven’t used them] . And there are many more.
Well, there are female perspective dialogues and choices sprinkled here and there but it still feels odd.
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I can see y’all’s frustration,but if this makes you feel better,the author had actually started this of as a male locked mc book and later added the option to play as a female,he only even just added the female choices a few updates after he implemented the ability to play as a female and I think he said something about progressing the book before going back to fix the mistakes cause it would probably cause future updates to not come out as early as they should.
So I think he knows and he should be fixing it in due time or when he’s reached a certain amount of chapters he wants to cover.
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Is that also the reason for straight romance locks? Or is there another reason?
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Plot reasons
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Is it only me or are male ROs arsehole-ish? So far male ROs are bleh for me, maybe I should play male MC for this.
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Eh, that’s part of their charm 
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Merric would be in tears if he saw this rn. Lol but I did intend for the ROs to be like that.
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Hello there! Welcome to the threads!
I really appreciate your feedback and your honesty. Thanks for the reply. I’m sorry that this affected your experience with the book but @JkDeez explained the situation already. I assure you I will go back and fixes the errors stated in the earlier chapters. I haven’t as yet because I want to at least reach a little past the half mark of the whole book so it feels like I’m making progress(the book is hella long).
Once I do that then I’ll go back and fix the grammar errors, gender errors, code errors and etcetera in one go. Though if it continues to be a problem I might just have to go back sooner.
As for the locked romance options @Wolvenkrass already said it. If I say it will be a spoiler.
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Ugh, you gotta say that huh? SPOILER, now I wanna know it even more. I’m the type to read the end of a novel first, watch final/closing episode of a series first 
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Im assuming, I will be a solo knight when the only options to dance at fair were men. None of the men are giving me a look they interested either, mostly cause story was man locked. That or I have no interest and ignored their glance. I prefer they stay that way. Dance? Nope, danced by myself.
I would be surprised if this isnt true about just them 3 or whatever. Not gonna date Mr Sky, as I’d rather kill him, honestly.
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I can totally understand why you wanna kill Jirell but what about the other two? Well which ever path you choose just make sure to have fun.
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I feel like when we find out whatever is going on with Lea with either going to get a broken transformation/power…or will be the ones that end up broken in two either way I cant wait to read what you have instore for us next time
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You think so? I guess we’ll just have to wait and see.
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I enjoyed the update even though I ended up dead once or twice but that was because I failed to get everyone to help fight cos I just ignored what they were doing. I just wanna know where the hell Lea is since Kelly’s comments won’t make her disappear like that
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Lol I suspect you had a hard time with the fight. I had a tough time myself too😆. But I knew a strategy to finish the fight faster so that helped.
Who was the leader in your team? I chose Jirell.
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Meric I think. It’s a good choice since he has a good idea what he doing and probably won’t pull a prank like Kelly.
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