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I think you definitely need someone to proof read this, the sentences don’t flow together. Always start a sentence with a capital letter. I like the concept but at the moment it seems as if a child has written this. Not being offensive just a bit of helpful criticism.
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Well I liked the concept . The writing and editing could be better though (like a lot). Sad to see the author banned and the project shelved.
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What did the author do exactly?
Not to rehash, but if you literally press on the authors profile at the very top of this page, it says the account is suspended because the author advocated for date rape. So yeah, they were banned for a pretty damn valid reason.
Damn that’s fucked up. Did they advocate it in the story or on the forum?.
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No clue. I only know what the reasoning itself is because the profile outright tells why the account was suspended.
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The author spoke about a part of story of Lords of Infinity (which includes date rape) and made a joke about it.
At first even I didn’t know the meaning of the word , then I googled it. I guess it means having sex with someone on the pretense of marrying them .
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Well hello guys. I am back. After spending more than a year suspended . I am finally back. As for why I was suspended @060_sc has already explained quite well. And yes I did make a joke on date rape concept ( at that time I didn’t knew that such a term existed, I had to google it myself after suspension). I am sorry to all of you. It was my mistake. And I have learnt to never make jokes about things you don’t know about.
As for Vengeance, I have been working on it for a year ( on and off). I have outlined the story and have worked on better writing technics. While I don’t plan on commercializing this project anymore. I would love to finish this project for all those who were interested in it. So while I can’t guarantee you the date for next update. I will be releasing it to public by October first week. Like before if you guys any doubt you can post it here and I will try to answer it to the best of my abilities.
EDIT: For some reason I can’t update the main post and title . @jasonstevanhill is there some issue with the post ?
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Unfortunately my computers files have been all corrupted. The update may take some more time. In the meanwhile you guys can give suggestions of what you would want to see next in the story.
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Is this continuing 1st off? Would hate too see this amazing story be done
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Yes. The same story but done some editing. And made it more what if like rather than a story. I plan to add 2 paths to the story. Also tried to make the stats in such a way that you don’t have to use cheats.
Ok makes sense thanks can’t wait for update
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Did this get transferred to COG?
Inactive thread - OP, please contact the mods when you’d like it reopened
Hey guys so recently I was able to extract data from my corrupt files. I know I was away for a while but I am going to try to finish this.
3rd chapter is being written now.
Here is a little sneak peak.
I am working on the boss route now.
Note: I wanted to add a pic but the website says can’t embed media in a post. If any of you knows how to solve this problem do tell I will then be able to share the sneak peak.
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No but I have my files all back now. Even for a software engineer its very difficult to retrieve data from your corrupted OS laptop.
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