Vengeance-Your Revenge (WIP) ( Updated 11th July 2023 Word count-26k) ---Chapter 2 released

While the pole didn’t serve the purpose. I know now who you are rooting for the most. Don’t worry soon u will get a new update with improved game mechanics .

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Good luck man, I like that you are actively communicating ur progress, i want to see this story progress :slight_smile:

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thanks , I was in a bad situation for sometime. I am currently working on the second chapter and also improving the world creation.
Will try to give a big update by 25th April.
Also I have created a patreon page for the world creation. To help readers understand where the characters are coming from and also get early updates.

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New update.
Added a few scenes and bugs fixed.

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Found this:

chapter2 line 18: invalid indent, expected at least one line in ‘if’ true block

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Unfortunately I am not getting this error while playing the demo.

Im still getting the same error message. Please check again.

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OK I will see to it. I think there is some problem.

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error chapter 2 line 18 invalid

Do we join the mob as the boss or do we need to work up the ladder?

@Tempted_MCC you create ur own syndicate. Ur journey will start from being a new man in crime to becoming the Godfather or maybe u a place will be booked for u in the graveyard.

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Big update coming by the end of this month around 100k words. Now you will meet several new characters and fight for ur vengeance.

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Very interesting

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Hyped for it :slight_smile:

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Minor update : Chapter 2- The Confrontation is finished and released
From chapter 3 there will be two different plotlines.
One where you focus on being an equal with ur father before doing the inevitable
And the other where you will focus on destroying him rather than building your own crime syndicate.
Chapter 3 will be huge.
I have worked on it a bit about half and will soon start releasing it.
Any and all feedbacks are appreciated.

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Well which route are you more excited to play :

  • Boss Route
  • Associate Route

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I will release chapter 3 accordingly.

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@Shreyash_Chanda still cant continue chapter 2.

chapter2 line 18: invalid indent, expected at least one line in ‘if’ true block

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@Bulk_Biceps which option did you Choose if you could tell me. I had no problem with the game while play testing that’s why I am asking.

Well, MC is female, First RO is female, Second RO Male, Scene with father in the house MC attacked.

If thats what you are asking about…

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@Bulk_Biceps I see your stat is less than the if command. OK I will see onto it. Give me a days time.

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