Velocity: The Race Begins (WIP) 140k+ words

His birthday just came. And I liked back then when Rey used to jump up from the stage with the “ who that jumping out the sky “ theme best Rey

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Yeah I loved that entrance man. But I loved the boyahka theme more.

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If he could still do the stage jump with it and still some how kept the smoke “ssssssshhhhh” in it I would love it more but I still got love for it tho hahahaha

And if he had another revamped version of the gold attire game over for any after it

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That would be cool but I think now that’s he’s a bit older it would be difficult. But the smoke should definitely come back.

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Yea he can barely do the 619 now. And yea the smoke really should come back

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hey author how do we win against the serial killer cuz he keeps wacking me everytime I try to fight him!

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Hey if your MC is good enough at combat then you can beat him, but if your combat stat isn’t that great, then, welp🤷.

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Will we see new ro in future chapters

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Can we customize our cars like using custom nitro engines that will help in actual races?

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Yeah I added that already where you can use NoS to help with races. After chapter six you can start racing with NoS if you meet the right conditions.
Also I do plan to include other upgrades too. Thanks for the ideas!

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It wont let me get in the car with Amaya

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Hey are you able to get into the car with Amaya now?

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Any updates because i getting ready for more races while playing my music in the starter car haha?

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hi!! okay so I finally got around to playing this and-- damn, I do love cars lol. I usually like looking at the code when playing bc I like feeling validated w/my choices and I think I noticed something?

In Chapter 3, “place = 1” and that remained true for the rest of the chapter (meaning I got the choices associated with place = 1 and the scene where you’re given the numbers and the achievement too so I know "m not trippin…) but when I went on to Chapter 4, I noticed that I wasn’t getting the scenes or the dialogue options associated with “place = 1” , instead for some reason it assumed I didn’t participate in the race when I did?? At first I thought it was just me, so I went through the game again on my other devices (just making extra sure y’know) and it kept happening… which is a shame cause it messed up the continuity of the play.

Anyways, I really do like this story you got here! Seems super fun to go through, I’m excited to see where this goes! Thank you for your hard work <33

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Oh hey there mate. The updated version can be found on Patreon. And don’t worry it’s free to join.

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:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Aww thanks for sharing your feedback and I’m very happy you enjoyed it. I’ll do my best meet the high expectations and give you quality content.

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Thank you for letting me know I be away for a little while lol

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No problem. It’s all good👍.

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Is there a Matthias guide for the Nos because I got him to 60 after helping at the auto shop and still I can’t get him in crew or to install the nos hahahaha

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Wait I finally got him to join lol

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