I found that if I skip to Chapter 3 and choose ‘Of course’ in the question ‘Did you ask Inaya to marry you’, I can select ‘I have to take care of my future wife’ when buying pastry for her. However, if I start from the beginning and try to marry her in Chapter 2, this option isn’t available. Is this a bug?
LMAO I forgot to update the variable in chapter 2. Thanks for pointing it out. It should be fixed now.
A magnificent update indeed, and yes I wan to be snapped like a twig thank you very much
The relationship event with Inaya is really sweet, an amazing job! Professor Dareen is even cheering for us. It seems now that the professors at the academy are quite kind and lovely. Mary is like a grandmother who treats students as her own children, Dareen is like a gentle big sister, Adam… well, apart from him being very strong, I don’t know him very well. I’ve already started to consider the Academy my home.
Same
It was so traumatising for me to write because in context with the Knight’s past, it becomes so
Hehe, so you already consider it ‘Maison Academy’
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Okay sorry, I will be taking my leave now.
So is the MC weak or strong?
RN, they are pretty much like a child thrown into the middle of the World’s most talented people. Luckily for them, their ability to emulate others can make them a master of all trades in the future.
I shall wait until it’s the right time
I was reading and the story is great and I enjoyed it, but…I just for the life of me cannot get over the fact that one character has my name (Iram) and two of the other characters are the same names as my two sisters…
Lol, I am South Asian, hence why the characters have common asian names.
With the help of @AnonTheAnonymous, the stat_screen is now available in relationship events.
So yeah, that’s a thing now… (I spent 3 hours on implementing system …)
I have updated adding 112k words, but I am a bit tired atm to write evrything down so I will leave an image:
The game has a lot of potential, but man, there are parts that are so confusing it feels like I’m reading with a stroke—or more like reading a bad translation. You know that feeling when you read something translated and it’s like parts are missing or the context feels off?
or i need some sleep I will reread it tommorow.
I really love how the RO interaction segments have so many branching storylines. The shopping trip with Inaya and the library scene are my absolute favorites. I replayed them over and over just to read all the branches. OMG, how can she be so cute? I love Inaya soooooo much! Best girl in the world!!!
……Okay, I need to compose myself.
I would appreciate if perhaps you could point out the parts where you felt lost or felt the description wasn’t conveying what it was supposed to convey so I may review and see if I missed something jarring. If you mean the end of chapter 5, than indeed that’s a bit bugged and unrefined. I didn’t wish to end the demo in the middle of the chapter so I kept it in. I will be working on fixing that as soon as I can. However, if you mean anywhere before that, it would be incredibly helpful if I could be pointed towards those specific parts.
This is so sweet to hear!
Hello I really loved the update.
I think you have created a great world for us to explore.I love the various calamities and other mysteries/secret that are in this world, but mentioning them just by their names and not explaining what they were, makes me think I will probably forgot about them(So a little explanation would be nice).
Also maybe when playing the ‘game’ with Adella in the restaurant, a MC’s whose hobby is studying history should be able to answer her questions.
Huh it seems like I am having trouble uploading my images, so I guess I’ll try explaining through text
Spoilers
At the start when dining with Aliya she says Let’s just eating
Asking Aiza about Sir Adam’s knighthood in the first class. She says Knighthood may only attained be defeating Sir Adam
In the Enchancement class the professor’s pronouns randomly switches
Also when Mary explains the Order she mentions that the Higher Orders are Orders 7-10 which should be 7-12 as there are 6 Higher Orders. And the Divine Order and anomalies should be in the 13th group.
When following Aiza after almost getting assassinated,Inaya changes clothes from a knocked out guard.
So don’t accomodate her
When going with Link after nearly getting assassinated. And the child exploding.
All the had bad blood burnt away
I don’t remember where this is exactly but it’s after submitting an assignment and my MC is on Aiza’s Route. The pronouns of your martus change randomly.
Another one with the Martus but it’s Aiza addressing Mr. Martus and agreeing to give him treats for his cooperation. I am won’t to believe
This is in the second Interlude I believe with the D̸̡̢͖̹̟̟̮͇̳̀̆͐̍̓̄͋Ȇ̶̪̣S̷̢͈̠̊̑̇͊̏́͑̏̌̈́͌̒̈́̈̈́͝T̴̛̰̠͎̹̫̺̝͚̥̝̼͚͉͇͆̒́̄̔̍̽̽͋͑̊̀̂̍̽͝R̷̼̰̙̺̮̯̱̮̙̱͙̞͇͚̜̓̐̈́̽̊̔̈́̑̊̂͘͠ͅO̵̖̼̩̖̝̣̯̞͚̒̀́Y̵̢̪͙̘̩͉̠͖͚̯̙̤̊͑̏̒̅̆̑͜͝͝E̷̢̨͔̠͈͓͕̪̗̭̲̺͖̤̖̾̾̀͒̍̀͝͠R̵̡̧̨̪̗̥͗̓̉̑̊̌ͅ ̸̨͚̩̭̝̜͇̦̝̖͚̼͙̯̼͍̏ͅÓ̸̭̲͓͖̯̪̊́̂̽̿̋̍̂̚F̴̛͇͔̲̈́͒́́̑̆͐̓̓̚͠͝ ̵͔̞͖̣̬̲̜̝͉͖͔͇̆Ẇ̷͖̗̥̝̺̣̭̩̤̃̐̌̉̄̇͒͋Ỏ̵̧̞̜̬̟̼̘̙̫̱̣̪̙̯̂͜͜͜R̶͇͈̼̹̜̻̣̊͜L̵̯̟̒͛̆̅̿̉͒̾͋̂͌͝D̷̬͔͛͑͗̋͌̓̏̇͒̓͗̇̆͌Š̴͈͉̣ R̵̡̢̝̖̩̤̖̮̖̤̗͖͠ͅa̴̛̹̫̫̙̩͕̱͉̳̫͉̹̣͌͗͆͗̑͆̂̈́͊̈́ͅe̴̛̞̟̦͈̠͈̟͍̝̼̾̽̆͛͑̅͗͌̈̌͋̓̓̈́̾̋̂̚͝͝͠ͅͅỷ̶̨̡̡̛̝̳̝̦̦͖̣̮̪̲̜̬̖͍̯͙͈̥̗̻̣̿͛̅́́͜͜g̶̨̭̣͔̼̠̞̩͉̭̙̼̝̟̫͕̩̀̓͆̈̌̆̽̈́̓̿͗̍̔̐̔͘̕ͅh̸̡̡͍̟̭̖̫̼͓̯͔̳͚̞̱̦͙̼͚̠͈̰̀̒̾͛̈́̌̉̓̅́̃͝͝͠a̵̧̻̺͕͈͔̤̤̫̩̅͆̃̄̌̍́̏͑̃̀̎͐̐̀̔̅̿̍͋͂͘͝r̷̭͓͇̀͋̈̓͂́͂̄̚.
I notice the pronouns kept changing
Also looking at the code the gender of the D̸̡̢͖̹̟̟̮͇̳̀̆͐̍̓̄͋Ȇ̶̪̣S̷̢͈̠̊̑̇͊̏́͑̏̌̈́͌̒̈́̈̈́͝T̴̛̰̠͎̹̫̺̝͚̥̝̼͚͉͇͆̒́̄̔̍̽̽͋͑̊̀̂̍̽͝R̷̼̰̙̺̮̯̱̮̙̱͙̞͇͚̜̓̐̈́̽̊̔̈́̑̊̂͘͠ͅO̵̖̼̩̖̝̣̯̞͚̒̀́Y̵̢̪͙̘̩͉̠͖͚̯̙̤̊͑̏̒̅̆̑͜͝͝E̷̢̨͔̠͈͓͕̪̗̭̲̺͖̤̖̾̾̀͒̍̀͝͠R̵̡̧̨̪̗̥͗̓̉̑̊̌ͅ ̸̨͚̩̭̝̜͇̦̝̖͚̼͙̯̼͍̏ͅÓ̸̭̲͓͖̯̪̊́̂̽̿̋̍̂̚F̴̛͇͔̲̈́͒́́̑̆͐̓̓̚͠͝ ̵͔̞͖̣̬̲̜̝͉͖͔͇̆Ẇ̷͖̗̥̝̺̣̭̩̤̃̐̌̉̄̇͒͋Ỏ̵̧̞̜̬̟̼̘̙̫̱̣̪̙̯̂͜͜͜R̶͇͈̼̹̜̻̣̊͜L̵̯̟̒͛̆̅̿̉͒̾͋̂͌͝D̷̬͔͛͑͗̋͌̓̏̇͒̓͗̇̆͌Š̴͈͉̣ is set as female
when your MC is male.(Bug or not, I don’t know)(Cause I think they were MC as judging by the opening scene and the connection of the Void and Theory with the MC, could be severely wrong though)
All in all I really enjoyed this update and good luck with the next one.
I especially enjoyed Aiza’s route she seems very rude (which she is) at first but underneath the rudeness I truly believe she cares for the MC. Don’t let her hear me or else she’ll probably call me a lummox.
Directly after the Festival of Auroras, there is an arc which expands on (or more accurately, ‘reveals’) the main plot and all that so I am saving it for then.
Yep very logical. I will include that in my notes.
This one is intentional. Their gender is always opposite to that of the MC
I have gone and fixed most of what you mentioned in my game files (not uploaded yet). Many thanks for bringing those to my attention. About the stuff at the end of chapter 5, yeah that was not much tested due to some time constraints. I have also fixed most of that in my CSIDE files, and I will upload that after a bit more testing.
Holy fucking peak
“I had a dream”
I love inaya so much. Having my mc and inaya be absolutely crazy for each other is so fun.
I cannot wait for this to be finished
How do you unlock aiza relationship event
It isn’t written yet. In an ideal World, I would have had 5 of her events written becuse I have their concepts, but well, this is not an ideal World (by a longshot). Her 1st and 2nd are next in line to be written.